Almighty World Architect

After the protagonist participated in the Three Kingdoms Competition, all the plot and characters collapsed. I don't know when the protagonist's head became disabled. Even if his mood changed, he had to use his brain. The trump card was leaked when he was told, and he died when he was told. The protagonist couldn't do anything, and he was filled with righteous indignation to save this person. A country, the problem is that no one asked him, he didn't know how to save him even if he sacrificed some of the people. Who asked you to save? I don't understand. To be honest, I complained so much because I felt that the money I spent on the book was not worth it. It was obviously good at the beginning, but it was poisonous at the end. Is it okay, the author, even if you adjust the outline and clarify the plot before writing, it will be okay. There is no supporting character beside the author now. It will be of no use to save the living dead afterwards. The biggest twist in the whole book is that the protagonist is dancing alone, and there is no interaction and growth. Long, an architect insists on playing a national war. What kind of trash saint son of darkness comes out and dances so happily? What kind of awesome association is foreshadowed in the front? No one cares about a person or a news. Taboo is still being hunted. I see that Taboo is still somewhat capable. The back of this book is full of poisonous points.

First, build the world. Since the thriller genre was chosen at the beginning, they should continue to experience love and justice later. If it is to build the martial arts world, just a few will be good. Too many will not be interesting. It seems that the author is not reading on QQ to read the comments, but I still suggest that I hope to create a creative building for building the world, specifically for readers to create a few good ones. Yes, to be honest, I really want the protagonist to build the world of "Three Body", as well as the world of "Cthulhu Mythos" from the Middle Ages to the modern era, face the evil god directly, let them experience the feeling of despair and madness, and also create an amnesia mode, enter the world and forget their previous memories, and only remember the memory of this world. There are also live broadcast strategies and so on.

Author, I beg you to read the book reviews! The concept of the book is very good and the setting is also good! The problem is that this kind of pretending to slap the protagonist in the face and abuse the protagonist is already bad in the streets. You think a big BOOS can still accept the abuse of the protagonist, after all, the difference in strength is too big! I wonder if such a weakling like this is always the case, and then the protagonist's counterattack is slow and weak, which makes people really unhappy when they see it! If you can't grasp this kind of plot, don't write this kind of plot! Even if it develops steadily all the way, it doesn't matter! Half of the 10 chapter reviews for a book are comments complaining about this kind of plot and discouraging people from quitting. Be careful. Although you write the novel yourself, if you alone don't meet the audience's needs and aesthetics, who will read it? Maybe you will say, whether you like it or not! If you give up most people for the few who like this kind of plot, then I have nothing to say. Even if I like it, I won't read it. You don't write novels to make money, and you don't write novels for the audience! Damn it, what if the eunuch is there that day and no one can be found?

The writing is okay, but the routine is old, that is, one person insists on finding trouble, and then lets the protagonist show off and slap him in the face. The IQ of the supporting characters is slightly low, and there is nothing wrong with the rest. It is watchable, but the routines are too old and repeated, which is quite alienating. If you can't write this kind of pretentious way, I suggest you don't keep doing it. It has a more obvious effect on persuading old bookworms to quit. If it weren't for this creative idea, I estimate that the probability of giving up the book would be very high. 🙃

New books are like seedlings, they need to be taken good care of. ^O^

The following remarks are purely personal. You may have different opinions. You are welcome to debate them. How should I put it? I don't know if this is real data. Only 0.6% Of the 773 people commented, and most of them were positive comments? Well, first of all, it's the usual way of inheriting memories through time travel. I won't talk about it here. After all, writing this way can retain more people. Although most people may be like me and can't stand it after reading thirty chapters. Well, I'm telling the truth. World Architect sounds lofty, but of course it is just a profession. Source Energy also sounds powerful, but in fact it is just emotional energy, mental power, and currency in the author's book with another name. Generally speaking, these uncomfortable loopholes, well, loopholes in the world, this kind of world... The existence is the greatest luck. The subject matter is good, the world architect, the plot is generally unknown, and the character description is dark. To put it simply, this is a novel that makes people laugh in the first thirty chapters and is commonly known as (uncomfortable). The follow-up is unknown.

The subject matter is okay, but the routine is so rubbish. I'm so disappointed.

The author must be poisonous, the rest of the article collapses, it's too poisonous

The idea is good, but the plot is too toxic. The protagonist can only come up with ideas and rely on others to wipe his ass. . .

The villain is a bit mentally retarded, I can't stand it anymore