Perfect World: I Am the Liver Emperor!
About This Novel
Bai Yixin, who spent the whole night cultivating immortality and finally became an immortal, woke up again, but in a perfect world. Without the supreme bone that is born with its own treasures, without the double eyes that can see through all illusions, relying on a game panel and using the liver to enter the Tao, mortals can still reach the top! I want to become an immortal and feel free and at ease. If I become an emperor, I will be honored forever!
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Official(78)Scraped 10d ago
When writing fan fiction, I personally don't like to highlight the protagonist by overshadowing the original character. It seems that Huo Ling'er and Shi Hao's relationship only has benefits, and An Lan has nothing to do with arresting Suizhou and Shi Hao. What you wrote seems like Huo Ling'er's fate will be better as long as he doesn't get married to Shi Hao. Yes, what you wrote next is 😜. In the second picture, you can just cut off the Black Evil Lotus. It seems that the protagonist stole the lotus and knew how to leave the roots. Shi Hao dug out all the roots when Lian was gone. In the original work, Shi Hao also ate the lotus roots together to preserve the medicinal properties. Eat it directly😔.
To be honest, it's very average. Fan fiction without the development of a super-timeline can be said to be copying the original work, with no new ideas, and there is a high probability that the writing style is not as good as the original author. It seems to you that it is better to read the original work directly, because the outline is still the outline of the original work, and the plot is patched together with classic plots, which will only make it more disgusting.
Who is the heroine?
Who is the heroine? Does the author have Liu Shen?
Does the author have Yuechan and Yunxi as the heroines?
Woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
What is this? Can anyone explain it?
I found out that Perfect fans all wrote about being afraid of the desolate future, saying that they couldn't steal Huo Ling'er, Yun Xi, etc. I was surprised. What about your future? Future Huang comes over to fuck you. Your future body won't be indifferent! I write as if I have no future. I'm convinced.
perfect world heroine
The heroine of the perfect world, I hope it is Willow God and the Witch
Faster, faster, faster, no more eunuchs
You wrote about the realm of cultivating immortals in a perfect world, and for a moment I lost interest in reading.
The combat effectiveness of traditional cultivators is rubbish. How dare they practice Qi against the blood-moving realm? He can move blood and smash boulders with one punch, but during the period of Qi training, he is still the same as a mortal. Traditional cultivation of immortals relies on a group of foreign objects and rubbish. The one who can defeat all methods with one force is always the top system.
Perfection does not belong to this piece of ancient history
Combining the trilogy, you will know that Shi Hao does not belong to this piece of ancient history. The reason for not changing the past is because he does not want to change, not because he cannot change. When the perfect start was made, Shi Hao was already the Immortal Emperor. The past and future of the Immortal Emperor have become a closed loop, and every past is the original body, so the corpse Corpse tried to kill Shi Hao directly from the past through An Lan, but Shi Hao directly sent his Immortal Emperor blood to the Emperor's Fall era, and was just waiting for Corpse to take action. If written perfectly, there would be nothing that could interfere with Shi Hao's existence, let alone break the marriage, because the beginning is the body. . . You have become enemies like this, think about how you can live in peace with him. . . Unless there is no Shi Hao in the past, but if you think about it, you have to stab Ye Fan too
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Official(78)Scraped 10d ago
When writing fan fiction, I personally don't like to highlight the protagonist by overshadowing the original character. It seems that Huo Ling'er and Shi Hao's relationship only has benefits, and An Lan has nothing to do with arresting Suizhou and Shi Hao. What you wrote seems like Huo Ling'er's fate will be better as long as he doesn't get married to Shi Hao. Yes, what you wrote next is 😜. In the second picture, you can just cut off the Black Evil Lotus. It seems that the protagonist stole the lotus and knew how to leave the roots. Shi Hao dug out all the roots when Lian was gone. In the original work, Shi Hao also ate the lotus roots together to preserve the medicinal properties. Eat it directly😔.
To be honest, it's very average. Fan fiction without the development of a super-timeline can be said to be copying the original work, with no new ideas, and there is a high probability that the writing style is not as good as the original author. It seems to you that it is better to read the original work directly, because the outline is still the outline of the original work, and the plot is patched together with classic plots, which will only make it more disgusting.
Who is the heroine?
Who is the heroine? Does the author have Liu Shen?
Does the author have Yuechan and Yunxi as the heroines?
Woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
What is this? Can anyone explain it?
I found out that Perfect fans all wrote about being afraid of the desolate future, saying that they couldn't steal Huo Ling'er, Yun Xi, etc. I was surprised. What about your future? Future Huang comes over to fuck you. Your future body won't be indifferent! I write as if I have no future. I'm convinced.
perfect world heroine
The heroine of the perfect world, I hope it is Willow God and the Witch
Faster, faster, faster, no more eunuchs
You wrote about the realm of cultivating immortals in a perfect world, and for a moment I lost interest in reading.
The combat effectiveness of traditional cultivators is rubbish. How dare they practice Qi against the blood-moving realm? He can move blood and smash boulders with one punch, but during the period of Qi training, he is still the same as a mortal. Traditional cultivation of immortals relies on a group of foreign objects and rubbish. The one who can defeat all methods with one force is always the top system.
Perfection does not belong to this piece of ancient history
Combining the trilogy, you will know that Shi Hao does not belong to this piece of ancient history. The reason for not changing the past is because he does not want to change, not because he cannot change. When the perfect start was made, Shi Hao was already the Immortal Emperor. The past and future of the Immortal Emperor have become a closed loop, and every past is the original body, so the corpse Corpse tried to kill Shi Hao directly from the past through An Lan, but Shi Hao directly sent his Immortal Emperor blood to the Emperor's Fall era, and was just waiting for Corpse to take action. If written perfectly, there would be nothing that could interfere with Shi Hao's existence, let alone break the marriage, because the beginning is the body. . . You have become enemies like this, think about how you can live in peace with him. . . Unless there is no Shi Hao in the past, but if you think about it, you have to stab Ye Fan too
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