Spell Return: Devour

But I think the whole novel has a fast pace, precise and concise wording, and a ridiculously smooth structure that makes people want to learn from it. But when I got to the back, I felt that the smoothness was a little weird. Moreover, this is written by a new author, and the narrative style is so different from ordinary fan works that I can't feel the author's psychology as a fan author. There is nothing interesting about this work. The protagonist is like a passerby, with no personality traits, the character design is too standard and template, and has no memory points. It adopts a fan world view. We all know the content ourselves, so there is no need to retell the setting from the perspective of the protagonist. And the protagonist is a time traveler, so he needs to use time traveler to explain his psychological precocity, but he also seems to have no memory of the original plot at all, so there is no information gap. There is no confrontation plot or character relationship in the story. The protagonist has both parents. I can't even tell whether this is a forward narrative (going toward the future) or a backward narrative (digging into the past). Writing about ordinary people cannot describe the deep psychology of ordinary people (sober despair, numbness, fear). Writing fear is just to serve the plot, let the protagonist discover that he is a magician, and then dissolve the emotion, and say whether it is light or light (relaxed), and whether it is heavy or heavy (heavy). If you are impatient, even if you ignore the fact that this work may be created by AI, as an ordinary fan work, I do not recommend reading it.