Douluo: I Am Really Not a Child of Luck!

I finally understand why there were evil soul masters from Dou Yi to Dou Si. Because Tang San broke the law, it affected the three generations🤡, which means that what Dou Yi and Tang San did was illegal. So it later influenced three generations of Tang people

The previous one was well written, although there was little plot, little setting, and not many dialogues, experiences, etc. For the protagonist, but it was at least passable. The subject matter was pretty good at the beginning... In the middle and late stages, it started to become completely nonsense... Probably the protagonist has improved a lot and started to increase his strength for Tang San and others... It even pulled out a mess of nonsense plot that Douluo didn't have in the first place! Do you want to read what you are writing? The continent has not stabilized, the God Realm has not been settled, I have not yet become a god, and even the Sun and Moon Continent has not appeared... Are all the gods in the divine world fools? You just pulled yourself out of the abyss... And people from the Abyss have entered Douluo Continent to cause trouble? People from the abyss who are not as powerful as God are causing trouble on the mainland, but God has no idea... I remember that the abyss seemed to be a world that Tang San found after he became a god, and the two worlds seemed to be almost the same, right? Then what the hell is this abyss you pulled out... Later in the book, it no longer tastes like Douluo Dalu. The more I look at it, the more boring it becomes...

It's so bad. I have to give the fairy grass to Tang San. I'm really speechless. What a stupid way to write it. I like Qian Renxue and then have to write about the plan to steal the country. It's outrageous. I've never seen such an outrageous book.

I think this book is another stud! Some people actually think that the Douluo Continent's angel clan is very righteous. It's so funny.

Check out the catalog! I knew that I didn't need to read Chapter 34 to write about Qian Renxue, the gambling dog. It was unreadable.

Is the protagonist a merciful Virgin? What do you think? Do you think the protagonist will lick Bibi Dong or Tang San?

No, in the first chapter, Tang Hao and the others are training. The protagonist is the same age as Qian Renxue. What the hell, this time is wrong.

How to say it? What this author wrote is obviously a fan, but it seems more like a plagiarism of the story. It has no own at all, just his own thoughts and concepts, and how do you say it yourself? You can't see the feeling of a fan in other people's writing, which is very poor.

I hope the return gift to Qian Renxue is not a Kung Fu method

The specific writing is good, and it can be regarded as a good Douluo fan, but there are still some poisonous points. Let me first talk about the pitfalls buried in the beginning. The author added a completely non-existent person to the Douluo Continent system, namely Bai Yuekui in the spirit cage, and her exclusive weapon Alaya became her martial spirit. The soul ring configuration is yellow, purple, purple, black, black, black, red, red, red, and the combat power is close to the limit Douluo. I saw more than 30 chapters, but Bai Yuekui didn't write down the specific soul power level, and he was set as a Douluo native. Moreover, a system of exercises that was not included in the original Douluo Continent system was added, that is, Guiyuan Gong, which is transmitted to the protagonist. It is used to strengthen the spirit and body, break limits, speed up the cultivation of soul power, and is used to compare with Tang San's Xuantian Gong. The background of the protagonist is Bai Yuekui's younger brother, who has awakened twin martial spirits. Bai Yuekui has the same martial spirit, Alaya Consciousness, plus an original martial spirit, the Eye of True Sight. I feel that the author designed Bai Yuekui's high-end combat power sister to compare with protectors such as Tang Hao, Qian Daoliu and Tang Chen, in case of lack of high-end combat power. Plot. The plot is not the same as that of the general public, the same age as Tang San, but the same age as Wuhundian Qian Renxue. It was a very normal start, and as we expected, we met unexpectedly on the way to obtain the soul ring, and got closer to Qian Renxue. In my opinion, the heroine should be the default one, but the relationship between them is that of friends, and there is no ambiguity. I can only say that the heroine is tentatively determined by me. Poisonous points within Chapter 30: So far, there is only one, which is that the protagonist has a close relationship with Qian Renxue. In addition to practicing together, he also gave Qian Renxue the Guiyuan Gong technique taught to him by his sister. This is not a small poisonous point. After all, it may not be very pleasing to some people. Moreover, it also adds characters and story backgrounds that are different from the original work, which is considered a second creation. For example, there are ice and snow spirits of the soul beast family that follow the original Ice God. The Ice God became a lineage of soul beasts. He fought with the Dragon God and the God Realm and was liquidated. He was injured by the Evil God King and was seriously injured and dying. He returned to the Douluo Continent and inherited his original power to the Ice and Snow Spirit clan that followed him, so that no one would succeed him in the future. However, their origin was cursed by the power of the evil God King, and the Ice and Snow Spirit clan who inherited the origin of the Ice God were also cursed. Generations of people broke through the years of cultivation and were cursed to erode their sanity and turned into walking zombies. They were defined as ice and snow witches. The Ice and Snow Spirit Ice God High Priest is the only soul beast that has been able to resist the power of the curse for 990,000 years. However, he is inextricably linked to the protagonist's sister Bai Yuekui, which can be regarded as an invisible connection. I don't know much about the rest. I'm tired of reading it and it's boring, so I haven't read it. But I have seen more than 30 chapters, which are quite good in detail. If you think it's good, you can give it a try.