Douluo: Lord of All Waters, Suppresses the Gods

Based on "water" and supplemented by "additional", the writing is not bad. I just saw it on the shelves. The first ten or so chapters are a bit childish. After all, I am also a reincarnation of a college student. My mental age is at least stable around 20. When I am mature, even if I have the body of a child, I don't want to really become younger. In the fourth chapter, an Internet meme was used, "Reverse the situation, open, open again", and suddenly there was a feeling of being depressed... Chapter 8, it is a good idea to have an "internal loop", you can be happy and excited, but just calm down - the original text "The more he thought about it, the more excited he became, and his laughter echoed by the empty lake for a long time. However, after the excitement, he gradually calmed down." There is also a careful consideration below, which can indicate that he has calmed down and is in the cooling-off period. What the hell, I just said calm down, but the whole chapter after the middle is full of your "angry", "sudden shouting", "jumping in anxiety", "lit powder keg", "burning fire", "feeling like sitting on pins and needles"... What are you doing? If you write it down in front of me, I can tear it up and let you rewrite it. In Chapters 4 and 11, speaking from a "body" perspective is meaningless and affects the perception. All that's left is a few typos, but that's nothing.

I just read the second chapter and I can't stand it. Were you a college student in your twenties in your last life? You behaved more like a child and you were said to have traveled through time. The logic of your writing is so confusing that you don't even understand it.

Ning Fengzhi came to ask for the fairy grass with a sword bone, yelling at each other with no respect at all, and finally agreed, what? I like licking Qibao Glazed Sect so much! ?

Brother, I didn't mean to say that you gave me a critical blow at the beginning. What do you mean by referring to that pair of special little flowers? Even if they are in their teens, I don't say twenty or thirty years old, they are not stupid enough to say such things. I feel embarrassed when I look at it. Can we not add any plot? Let's take an ordinary person between 17, 18 and 25, 25 or 26 years old. At this age, you occasionally write a little more maturely. After all, you say he is a time traveler. Let's write a little more maturely, okay? Otherwise, I really can't stand it, brother

It mainly writes about the various ways to play the water element, including killing Tang San and killing him in one strike without forcing him to let him go. Also, because this is the first time the author has written a novel, the first few chapters may not be very good, but after a quick glance, the subsequent gameplay will be very enjoyable.

The author quickly updated it and gave you a blast.

The foreshadowing has been completed, and the rhythm will take off next.

Is the author here? Is there multiple heroines? Are there Bibi Dong and Zhu Zhuqing? Also, can I include all the Tianshui girl group? Thank you.

I read the introduction and saw the God King Tang San. I want to ask, is the protagonist still there or is Tang San going to become a god? Or even a god-king?

The protagonist's pretense of tenderness at the beginning is almost making people vomit. You can pretend to be calm even if you are taciturn😐