Living to the End of Your Life, You Say It's a Life Simulation?

Living to the End of Your Life, You Say It's a Life Simulation?

by Hua Dongjie

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About This Novel

Li Chengfei traveled to a world of immortals. As a mortal, he thought he could cheat and become an immortal with his knowledge that transcended his time. I never thought that everything here is dangerous, and all mortals who want to become immortals will die miserably. Li Chengfei always walks on thin ice and never dares to put himself in danger. With endless regrets and longing for immortality, he died. The result... "Nan Ke Yimeng, life simulation is over, ready to restart..." Li Chengfei: "???" I sat up in shock when I was dying of illness. It was me hanging on the wall!

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I'm Looking For39mo ago

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The protagonist has been living among mortals for so many lifetimes. Why is he so sensitive to the moral bottom line? It all comes down to strength, and he feels helpless. Can a person who does whatever it takes to cultivate immortality have the courage of a mortal boss? If he wants to kill people, he can't hold back his anger. You are not a reckless man who cultivated immortality since you were born... Do you want to write about dogs or passionate people? It seems that I want to write about Gou, but it also has a hot-blooded fantasy flavor that I can't get rid of. Or maybe you feel that Gou is not suitable, so just let yourself go? The beginning looked like the book "The Road to Eternal Life". I originally thought I had found something I could read, but the more I read, the more something seemed wrong.

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If the Wind Blows Every Night in Autumn40mo ago

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Every time the protagonist starts a simulation, he starts from scratch, and the whole world becomes a game. So what if the protagonist becomes an immortal and a super god? If it is not in this world at all, then death is the beginning? Starting over from the very beginning, wasting time and energy, working for decades, and still being a mere mortal? ? ? What's the point?

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Anonymous36mo ago

You can't bring any brains to it, but you can take a look. It's just an insult to your IQ.

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Book Friends 20230217916_aa39mo ago

Here's a suggestion: pay attention to the frequency of rebirths

In the beginning, he was reborn in the human world more than a hundred times, and they were all written in a very general way. I have been writing about "Come to the Fairy World" for so long and it still doesn't die. Suddenly the Monkey King filmed him and reincarnated him. It felt like child's play. I wrote about various risks and opportunities before, but I ended up dying immediately after saving a woman. Later, after I was reincarnated, I wrote it in a general way, and my death was very casual. It's not that rebirth is not good, after all, that's the point of this book, but if you write about rebirth, the atmosphere of a relatively casual death changes a bit too quickly. During the break after rebirth, I don't know how the author will deal with some foreshadowing from the previous life, such as: In the paragraph about going shopping What happened to the blood bag I bought before? Are the clues provided by the saleswoman still useful? How is the son of the person who robbed the merchandise? The content of the three-way war How to deal with the frog? Will the people chasing the protagonist still pursue him in this life? What to do with the woman that the Monkey King robbed? Now after being reborn, I started writing a summary, but stopped halfway through the summary. The simpler way to write it is to directly summarize it until before death, or just rebirth until a short period of time before death, and the plot will be guided smoothly. Now I have cut it in half and continue writing. The protagonist did not directly go to the three-party war to refine the medicine. If the previous foreshadowings were all based on the rhythm of the previous life, it would feel a bit out of line if you summed it up and continued directly to the last death point. If you changed the plot, would the original foreshadowings still be used? Writing it as destiny is actually a very smart way, but you will definitely change your destiny once you go back. I hope that after changing your destiny, those foreshadowings can still be correct. The biggest problem with this golden finger is that the file is read too far away, and the gap between reading is too great. When you wrote about the human world, although the time span was long, you didn't write much about it, so it didn't feel abrupt. It's been so long since I came to the fairy world that I thought you wouldn't arrange for the protagonist to die. As a result, I read a super old file without warning. If this part is not handled well, it may directly crash. It seems that there is no problem so far. I hope it can be maintained. I suggest that the next time you die, the rebirth point should be closer. Write about the protagonist's psychological changes when he discovers that the rebirth point is getting closer and closer, which will also make everyone feel a little nervous. You can also write a more exciting time when you die, so as not to be casually slapped to death by a passing boss. I can understand that the fact that Goldfinger needs to recharge for five years can bring a bit of tension, but your writing makes it feel like the protagonist will definitely not die within five years. Although the protagonist's level is low, it cannot be concealed that after 5 years he actually becomes invincible...

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Life is Endless, Struggle is Endless38mo ago

New year, new atmosphere, new status, hundreds of updates, the author should come

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ゞmemoryㄣ_be40mo ago

Make a list by chance

I refreshed the book list and saw this strange novel title. Please support it😘

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Love Difference40mo ago

Updated once a day

It's good, but it's slow. If I don't recommend this book, no one will read it.

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Book Friends 33145440mo ago

Full of loopholes

Returning to the original place infinitely is invincible and eternal life. Why pursue immortality? It takes 50 years for a person to advance from the farming era to an airplane or missile. If you don't have enough imagination, why don't you just start the Galaxy Era?

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Life is Endless, Struggle is Endless38mo ago

Only Jiegeng is your destination,

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I'm Looking For39mo ago

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It's indescribable, maybe you can still see it if you pinch your head.

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