Knowledge of Dharma and Immortal Path

I'm surprised, why are there so few people watching this😌

The writing is okay, but the pace is too slow. Wouldn't you simply blur the time? I'm really confused, why do you have to write it all out? The details should be appropriate, not all the details. Reading the same thing too much will make you tired.

As a native, there are a lot of modern words in the article, which makes it look awkward.

So what, is the combat I wrote really bad? Is it necessary to reduce the description of the combat part? I saw some people said that there is a huge difference between my daily life and fighting, so I asked them specifically.

I read more than 200 chapters in the catalog before finding the world of cultivating immortals, and I am speechless.

I have been reading books about indigenous protagonists for 10 years, but I haven't seen many good ones. In addition, the author's indigenous people's IQs are too high and they don't think like indigenous people at all, but like modern people. 99% Of people from this ancient and closed background are illiterate. The ability of indigenous people to read is a big loophole. And how to get the golden finger system?

The writing is also good, but after reading the free chapters before they were released, I felt like I was reading a martial arts novel!

I can't stand the name of the protagonist. In reality, I have a grudge against a person named He Chen.

It's good-looking, but there are too few and it's a bit unsightly.

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