There Are Tens of Millions of Dharmakayas, Do You Call This Entry-level?

Holy mother bitch, everyone is dead. Why don't you run away anonymously? Think other people are fools? It's so disgusting, I'm giving up the book

Why don't you be stubborn if you hang up well? Doesn't it mean that you can't show your strength if you don't perform well? It's outrageous to be involved in the long history of ancient times while still in the first small realm! The first small realm jumps repeatedly. Have you read too many martial arts novels in your early years? Also, did you delete it from your browser? If you don't know how to write dialogues, just keep it simple. I always describe how the author is calm in the face of danger, acts like a fool, and puts on a bad face. It's really poisonous! Self-promotion articles don't even count.

It's too brainless. Since you are writing a novel based on the plot of ancient times, you must at least understand some common sense. A martial arts school adopts a beggar and provides food, shelter, and shelter. It is called martial arts. If you practice well, you will get 10 taels of silver. What is the concept of 10 taels of silver in ancient times?

Originally, this system setting was quite interesting, but as soon as the protagonist got a little better, he came into contact with the big boss fight, and then the protagonist was stuck in practicing blood training. I didn't understand this operation. At the beginning, when the pile skills improved, he practiced blood training. Later, he ate the blood training pills like candy. After he came into contact with the ancient great skills, he still practiced blood training. I really didn't understand this division of combat power. Then the protagonist can jump to level 3.4, And Sandman even didn't understand this. The operation, what I didn't understand even more was the plot of the protagonist coming into contact with the Demon-Suppressing Division. The protagonist gave the god-refining treasure as soon as he asked, and he was not afraid of being pinched to death by the boss, and he still had to enter the Demon-Suppressing Division in a daze. The previous logical ideas started to collapse from the Demon-Suppressing Division, and the pace was too fast. You let the protagonist come into contact with a level 10 powerful enemy when the protagonist was just level 0. The plot setting was too fast-food, and it almost looked like it was written by AI.

A teenage boy, when he fights, his adrenaline increases, he is not afraid of pain, he is so fierce, he closes his eyes? How is it possible?

Let's talk about the advantages first. The writing is good and the settings are relatively complete. It's obvious that a lot of thought was put into it. Disadvantages: There are too many psychological descriptions, too many sermons, and the underlying concepts of life are told over and over again without extension or sublimation. It will inevitably make you bored after reading too much. I recommend the two authors Yintian Shenyin and Grenade Afraid of Water to see how they explain their views in their writing. Another point is that the words and deeds of the characters often do not match their identity, which makes people feel uncomfortable. When writing, the author can try to figure out the relationship between the lines and the character's personality.

The more I watch it, the more I stretch my hips. This plot advancement is so life-threatening.

The protagonist has traveled through time. There should be no suspense about his birth. Change it to be clear and clear. Don't forget his identity.

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It's very good and beautiful. Kudos to the author!