I Drew a World

This book is very, very, very, very poisonous. I sacrifice myself for others and test the poison with my own body.

To be honest, the author's ideas in this book are very good, but the writing style and expression skills are really poor. There are many flaws, especially the beginning sentence, I am not a writer, but a painter. You can write it, I am a painter. Many things can be summarized in one sentence, and the author has to ramble before returning to the topic.

Have you gone to the wrong place again? Go back quickly, go back to the white interface full of the teacher's kind voice, I will take you home. -DingTalk guide

I've seen Chapter 50, what next? What is the main plot? What is the significance of connecting the two worlds? Where is the behind-the-scenes manipulation? I always feel that the author's writing style is the same as that of a certain Naruto book about Tokyo. The writing style in the later stages cannot be linked to each other, and the plot is meaningless.

We don't even set up an imaginary world, and the names of each country (Neon Country, M Country) are written so openly and honestly, we admire it!

Does this book have a protagonist? Do these dozens of pictures introduce the world? Who are you writing about? I suggest you delete them all before writing. Otherwise you are as beautiful as fireworks.

The beginning was okay, but I got hooked after about fifty or sixty pictures. It was so confusing that there was no main line here and there. I felt like the author just wrote whatever came to mind. You drew the Flame tribe at the beginning, and you could slowly complete the world. This is the main line. Suddenly, a three-eyed tribe flew into the sky, and it was a clone of dozens of planets and three major systems. Moreover, I have no idea what system groups you drew. . . . . You really have to guess by yourself, it's so fascinating to watch.

The subject matter is quite good, and the golden finger is also very open. It was quite good at the beginning, and the protagonist had a chance to appear. But in the end, there was no chance for the protagonist to appear. I wanted to give up the book a long time ago, but I persisted until I read 99 chapters. Now I really can't stand it anymore.

As a result, it made me feel sick and uncomfortable. Strongly report. Nausea

Author, did your book go off topic? The previous settings are almost never used later. You might as well change the title and introduction of the book into an ordinary spiritual recovery article.