Dreams Lead to Ancient Times? I Am Really Not an Ancient Taoist Ancestor

How should I put it? After living in the slums for so many years, you actually wrote the protagonist as such a white lotus. It is really inconsistent.

The protagonist is too dependent on Daozu. Whenever something happens, he will come to you Daozu. When something goes wrong, he will use Daozu's ability. Daozu's character is wrong. He is so good to his disciples and gives everything to them. Why don't he just get the immortal Taoist fruit from him? The protagonist is also required to take the initiative to practice. Daozu is too ignorant.

The back part is very poisonous. I guess the author is a descendant of the person who "turned fighting spirit into a horse". He is very proficient in the art of "belatedly arriving"! As long as "my" brother is not tortured to death, I will never appear! "If you don't suffer more for me, how can you embody my image of a saint who saves people from suffering?" The protagonist's heart is good for the world! Why do my relatives and friends suffer a little for the sake of this world? 😌 Don't worry! 😌 I alone have attained the Tao, chickens and dogs have ascended to heaven. In the future, I will be the Taoist ancestor. You are all short-term people😌 The hardships you are going through now and the pain you are suffering are all worth it😌 You go first on the road and suffer all the suffering in the world. I will come out from behind to save the common people. The name belongs to me, and you suffer all the hardships😌 Isn't this perfect?

First, is it fun to be a white lotus? Secondly, as a white lotus, what do you protect? Third, to sum up, what is the protagonist pretending to be? Not being able to think before doing something and not being able to measure when acting is called using your brain as a decoration. I have lived in the slums for more than ten years, and I don't understand anything about this world. It's hard for me to explain what this is. The innocent child took the edge and turned directly to the direction of the mentally retarded person.

This book has received mixed reviews. But I think this book is well written. After reading the book, my heart couldn't calm down for a long time! This book has a novel concept, unique subject matter, clear paragraphs, strange plot, ups and downs, clear main line, fascinating, and shows extraordinary literary skills in the ordinary. It can be said that every word is precious, every sentence is a classic, and it is a model that our generation should learn from. From the perspective of novel art, it may not be too successful, but its experimental significance is far greater than the success itself. A galloping horse, shooting a vulture and drawing a bow, heaven and earth are in my heart! This is a rare book that rekindles the fire of hope in my heart.

I'm speechless. The author's writing is not good. He has to imitate the sensational writing written by others. I just feel embarrassed watching it😓. After reading 30 chapters, I really can't stand it anymore. It's really disgusting. At least be decisive in killing. Damn it. You can't describe emotional scenes. Then can you imitate the great master Chen Dong? Why do you have to imitate Fenghuo? ? ?

To be honest, it was a bit fun to write, but it felt awkward at the same time, very awkward. The main character was a bit disgusting. There were too many problems with the character development of the main character. Maybe it was a foreshadowing, but I can't see that time, bye.

It's so fucking disgusting. You use your brother's name to pretend to kill people, and then you go out to play all day long. That means you idiot is the protagonist, otherwise your brother would have been slapped to death.

You are not a Holy Mother, but you should write about something happy when you write a book. This book is a bit uncomfortable to read, and my personal opinion is just so-so.

? Is it a series about the main character being a broom star? The first time the main character couldn't catch up with the old neighbor and his leg was broken. I didn't react until the second time the main character was raped and robbed at home and arrived on time. He was so angry that he was so angry that he wanted to take revenge. His anger level exploded and he realized that it was too good to use the pain of someone close to him to make the main character stronger. What a disgusting writing technique.