Douluo: Immortal Grass Martial Spirit, Black Jade Divine Bamboo
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[Dou Yiyi, no system, genius flow] Traveling across the Douluo Continent, Mo An became the orphan of a small family that was abandoned by the Haotian Sect and exterminated by the Spirit Hall. At the age of six, he was lucky enough to receive the Immortal Grass, the Black Jade Divine Bamboo and his innate soul power. However, after deeply understanding the operating rules of the world of Douluo Continent and sorting out his own current situation, Mo An decided to take a shortcut and eat soft rice. ...
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The writing is readable, but there are a lot of minor flaws. Freshly picked solid whale gum, if he picked it fresh, shouldn't it be gelatinous whale gum and whale brain? (Whale gum is available in Douyi, but it's called whale brain) Also, you wrote it as solid whale glue, and then you directly melted it in your mouth. Why, your oral temperature is so high? Where did the high temperature softening go? There is also a 6-year-old who is 1.6 Meters tall. Those who know it is the Bamboo Martial Spirit, but those who don't know it think they have awakened the Titan bloodline. There are also animal martial spirits, which cannot be possessed without a spirit ring attached. Dou Yi Wang Sheng and Ling Feng (the flying martial spirit of small birds) are both mentioned, but they will shine some light on the body and cannot increase the body shape or martial spirit characteristics. Ambergris, that thing is not the liquid in the body of the whale. It is the stuff that the sperm whale has after eating octopus or squid. It has a special bone that cannot be digested. It is filled with grease in the intestine and then pulled out and oxidized and saponified. Without this process, it would just be a lump of bones wrapped in cake (forget it)
Wouldn't the number one soul skill be pole vaulting?
I didn't expect that you were the author of Ice and Fire Pisces. You should have experience by now. The reason why you delayed the fairy grass for too long in the early stage is because you delayed it for too long some time ago. You were always in the water, so I haven't read it yet. I watched the protagonist after he got the fairy grass at the end. He actually uses the fairy grass as a martial spirit. It is best to get the fairy grass in the early and mid-term. If the protagonist takes the fairy grass, it must be the same as Ju Douluo. It is 100% suitable. Especially if the protagonist takes it when he was a child, it will definitely be better than Ju Douluo.
I have never seen such a big thing before. It makes me laugh to death. The first soul ring of the Black Jade Divine Bamboo Martial Soul absorbs Ruyi Vine. The reason is that it can become bigger and smaller. It makes me laugh to death. Doesn't the size increase with the improvement of the soul power? It's really more poisonous to write randomly.
Your first book is great at the front, but rubbish at the back. If you read this book the same as your last book, I will send you the razor blade. 😎😎😎😎😎😎
A bit stupid
What the hell are you doing by going to Qibao Glaze? Anyone with a normal mind wouldn't be like this. Thanks to the fact that you are highly talented and a loner, it would be nice if they didn't arrest you for breeding. After all, they are just assistants, and they have nothing to do with your resources.
There is no system that I like, it must be given a five-star rating
I don't like systematic reasons, the protagonist is like a puppet. Opportunity does not use brain planning, just sends it directly. Ability will not be developed using the brain, but created using the brain, and will be given directly.
Do you know Douluo Continent? Just write it
Brothers and sisters, does the heroine still have a rabbit? I personally like rabbits better.
Qibao Glazed Sect Ning Fengzhi is not a fool. If he were really good, he would no longer be focusing on Qibao Glazed Pagoda🤗
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Official(24)Scraped 1mo ago
Can see
The writing is readable, but there are a lot of minor flaws. Freshly picked solid whale gum, if he picked it fresh, shouldn't it be gelatinous whale gum and whale brain? (Whale gum is available in Douyi, but it's called whale brain) Also, you wrote it as solid whale glue, and then you directly melted it in your mouth. Why, your oral temperature is so high? Where did the high temperature softening go? There is also a 6-year-old who is 1.6 Meters tall. Those who know it is the Bamboo Martial Spirit, but those who don't know it think they have awakened the Titan bloodline. There are also animal martial spirits, which cannot be possessed without a spirit ring attached. Dou Yi Wang Sheng and Ling Feng (the flying martial spirit of small birds) are both mentioned, but they will shine some light on the body and cannot increase the body shape or martial spirit characteristics. Ambergris, that thing is not the liquid in the body of the whale. It is the stuff that the sperm whale has after eating octopus or squid. It has a special bone that cannot be digested. It is filled with grease in the intestine and then pulled out and oxidized and saponified. Without this process, it would just be a lump of bones wrapped in cake (forget it)
Wouldn't the number one soul skill be pole vaulting?
I didn't expect that you were the author of Ice and Fire Pisces. You should have experience by now. The reason why you delayed the fairy grass for too long in the early stage is because you delayed it for too long some time ago. You were always in the water, so I haven't read it yet. I watched the protagonist after he got the fairy grass at the end. He actually uses the fairy grass as a martial spirit. It is best to get the fairy grass in the early and mid-term. If the protagonist takes the fairy grass, it must be the same as Ju Douluo. It is 100% suitable. Especially if the protagonist takes it when he was a child, it will definitely be better than Ju Douluo.
I have never seen such a big thing before. It makes me laugh to death. The first soul ring of the Black Jade Divine Bamboo Martial Soul absorbs Ruyi Vine. The reason is that it can become bigger and smaller. It makes me laugh to death. Doesn't the size increase with the improvement of the soul power? It's really more poisonous to write randomly.
Your first book is great at the front, but rubbish at the back. If you read this book the same as your last book, I will send you the razor blade. 😎😎😎😎😎😎
A bit stupid
What the hell are you doing by going to Qibao Glaze? Anyone with a normal mind wouldn't be like this. Thanks to the fact that you are highly talented and a loner, it would be nice if they didn't arrest you for breeding. After all, they are just assistants, and they have nothing to do with your resources.
There is no system that I like, it must be given a five-star rating
I don't like systematic reasons, the protagonist is like a puppet. Opportunity does not use brain planning, just sends it directly. Ability will not be developed using the brain, but created using the brain, and will be given directly.
Do you know Douluo Continent? Just write it
Brothers and sisters, does the heroine still have a rabbit? I personally like rabbits better.
Qibao Glazed Sect Ning Fengzhi is not a fool. If he were really good, he would no longer be focusing on Qibao Glazed Pagoda🤗
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