
Ninja World: I Am Really an Auxiliary Ninja
by Come On
About This Novel
Akira Hatake, carrying the hero template of Ming Shiyin in the Honor of Kings mobile game, became the eldest son of the Hatake clan, and Kakashi became his biological brother. Akira Hatake, who aspired to become the strongest assistant in the ninja world, started training Kakashi, and looked forward to the good days in the future when Katian's dog leash will be tied to one and nine will be beaten. But here comes a new round of problems... Namikaze Minato: Xiao Ming, tie me up, I will be invincible with Thunder God + Rasengan! Jiraiya: Xiao Ming, tie me up and watch me in sage mode for seconds! Tsunade: Xiao Ming, hold my hand, and I will show you the new world after one punch. There are benefits! Naruto: Lord Ming, please hold me, I am no longer Hokage! Sasuke: Uncle, please tie the chain and take me flying! Looking at the crowd of master Cs who were waiting for food, Hatake Ming was speechless and choked. Who should I choose today? (The new book has been released, "Konoha: This Uchiha was born with double pupils")
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Official(26)Scraped 6d ago
I like the setting better, but about the heroine
I suggest you don't write about the heroine first and write about it later. Otherwise, the heroine will appear in just a few pictures and it will be very discouraging. I don't know if there are too many dog-licking or stallion stories nowadays. A female character will appear in just a few pictures. If the heroine is described emphatically in the picture, it will most likely be the heroine, which will immediately trigger a conditioned reflex. .
The more you write, the more rubbish you get
I was a little confused. Does Lin like Kakashi or the protagonist?
There is a small part in the book that feels like Lin is looking at the protagonist with a bit of reluctance
When I saw the heroine, I knew it was time to leave.
The treatment of Kirabi is too far-fetched. He has a high IQ as mentioned above, but there are twists and turns until Kirabi returns home for a little profit? Forcibly suppressed.
generally
If you don't play games, I have no interest in watching this plug-in. The plot writing is not good at all. Overall, it is average. The advantage may be that there are more words.
The likes are collecting, please give me a thumbs up for your help, thank you!
emm, what about the hexagrams?
Since you want to write about Ming Shiyin, then write it in full.
In fact, the trust between the protagonist and Jiraiya, Tsunade, and Minato is not high. They are more driven by interests, which is not interesting.
The biggest problem is that the writing is not good, it looks so childish and embarrassing.
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Official(26)Scraped 6d ago
I like the setting better, but about the heroine
I suggest you don't write about the heroine first and write about it later. Otherwise, the heroine will appear in just a few pictures and it will be very discouraging. I don't know if there are too many dog-licking or stallion stories nowadays. A female character will appear in just a few pictures. If the heroine is described emphatically in the picture, it will most likely be the heroine, which will immediately trigger a conditioned reflex. .
The more you write, the more rubbish you get
I was a little confused. Does Lin like Kakashi or the protagonist?
There is a small part in the book that feels like Lin is looking at the protagonist with a bit of reluctance
When I saw the heroine, I knew it was time to leave.
The treatment of Kirabi is too far-fetched. He has a high IQ as mentioned above, but there are twists and turns until Kirabi returns home for a little profit? Forcibly suppressed.
generally
If you don't play games, I have no interest in watching this plug-in. The plot writing is not good at all. Overall, it is average. The advantage may be that there are more words.
The likes are collecting, please give me a thumbs up for your help, thank you!
emm, what about the hexagrams?
Since you want to write about Ming Shiyin, then write it in full.
In fact, the trust between the protagonist and Jiraiya, Tsunade, and Minato is not high. They are more driven by interests, which is not interesting.
The biggest problem is that the writing is not good, it looks so childish and embarrassing.













