The Divine Machine of Konoha
About This Novel
The protagonist travels to the world of Naruto and changes his name and surname to become Soma Senha of Konoha Village. At this time, the Third War in the Ninja World was entering its climax. At the age of nine, he was promoted to genin and drafted into the battlefield after only two years in the ninja school. Fortunately, time travel comes with a golden finger, and one person's secret skill "Hundred Refinements of Divine Machinery" has become a blood inheritance limit bound to Souma Senbo, which can refine various ninja tools. At some point, the legend of Soma Senha began to spread in the ninja world. Tenten, who is accustomed to using ninja tools, said, "Ninja tools have never had a Kage level, and he filled this vacancy." Ku Lama said, "People call me 'disaster', but I am just the backup hidden energy source of his 'Gundam'!" Madara, who loves to dance, said, "What! You want to make a date with Souma Senha? My friend, listen to me, you can challenge Souma Senha to a duel, but don't make a date with him!"
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Official(13)Scraped 21d ago
The protagonist seems to have no brains
Although she is weak and weak, she still shows her abilities. Who will die if you don't die? And she still lets her go to school even though she knows that letting her go to school will expose her blood stains. She also said that Guren is very talented, so why not buy a house in Konoha and let her figure it out at home? It's not like there are no Ninjutsu. In Konoha, when she went to school to learn useless things, it would be better to let her practice her blood stains in the house. The thing that I can't understand the most is saving Lin. Let's make it clear that the protagonist can benefit from Rin's death. Obito takes off and starts causing chaos when Rin dies. The more chaos, the better for the protagonist. The higher-ups will not always pay attention. This period happens to be a development time for the protagonist, and the protagonist's escape from Madara and White Zetsu can be said to be a downer. Madara has experienced more battles than the protagonist has eaten. White Zetsu's reconnaissance is as good as Byakugan. To escape in front of these two people, unless you use time and space ninjutsu such as Flying Thunder God.
The protagonist is so stupid
It's so stupid to write, exposing one's ability so early would be courting death in Konoha. Even if your surname is Yuan Fei, Danzo can kill you. Besides, you are just an ordinary person,
In Konoha, there is no strength at the Six Paths level. Turtle is showing off. Danzo teaches you how to behave in minutes. Do you want to escape the roots at the age of 9? Even the Uchiha clan dares to kill this kind of loser, he is an idiot.
It feels like the protagonist is a fool, which is a bit insulting to the intelligence. As a time traveler, he clearly knows that there is a person like Danzo Orochimaru in Konoha, but he still hides his talent. He is discovered by Orochimaru, and he also learns many ninjutsu. At this time in the Ninja World War, if you don't find a chance to run away, find a safer place to live in seclusion, and have to follow Orochimaru on the battlefield. If it is because you want to get more benefits from Orochimaru's side, that's okay, it barely makes sense. But if you want to develop your subordinates, why don't you secretly develop them outside? You have to bring people with special blood like Guren to Konoha and send them to ninja schools. You can't learn anything there. This is not equivalent to leaving it in the open and hoping that Danzo will snatch it away.
Extremely childish and insulting to IQ. The protagonist looks like a fool.
If you don't have the strength, you should keep a low profile.
Give up, don't look anymore. It's uncomfortable to carry your head around.
Give you a six-star review
Report it all to Naruto, Konoha, etc. I wonder if you still like to push it?
Congratulations to the author for it being released soon
@author Ten recommended tickets and one monthly ticket total. On the shelves Are you ready for the explosive chapter update? How many chapters are you preparing to base?
It was fine at the beginning, but as it went up the shelves, the writing became more and more the same as 💩. I can't read it anymore.
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Official(13)Scraped 21d ago
The protagonist seems to have no brains
Although she is weak and weak, she still shows her abilities. Who will die if you don't die? And she still lets her go to school even though she knows that letting her go to school will expose her blood stains. She also said that Guren is very talented, so why not buy a house in Konoha and let her figure it out at home? It's not like there are no Ninjutsu. In Konoha, when she went to school to learn useless things, it would be better to let her practice her blood stains in the house. The thing that I can't understand the most is saving Lin. Let's make it clear that the protagonist can benefit from Rin's death. Obito takes off and starts causing chaos when Rin dies. The more chaos, the better for the protagonist. The higher-ups will not always pay attention. This period happens to be a development time for the protagonist, and the protagonist's escape from Madara and White Zetsu can be said to be a downer. Madara has experienced more battles than the protagonist has eaten. White Zetsu's reconnaissance is as good as Byakugan. To escape in front of these two people, unless you use time and space ninjutsu such as Flying Thunder God.
The protagonist is so stupid
It's so stupid to write, exposing one's ability so early would be courting death in Konoha. Even if your surname is Yuan Fei, Danzo can kill you. Besides, you are just an ordinary person,
In Konoha, there is no strength at the Six Paths level. Turtle is showing off. Danzo teaches you how to behave in minutes. Do you want to escape the roots at the age of 9? Even the Uchiha clan dares to kill this kind of loser, he is an idiot.
It feels like the protagonist is a fool, which is a bit insulting to the intelligence. As a time traveler, he clearly knows that there is a person like Danzo Orochimaru in Konoha, but he still hides his talent. He is discovered by Orochimaru, and he also learns many ninjutsu. At this time in the Ninja World War, if you don't find a chance to run away, find a safer place to live in seclusion, and have to follow Orochimaru on the battlefield. If it is because you want to get more benefits from Orochimaru's side, that's okay, it barely makes sense. But if you want to develop your subordinates, why don't you secretly develop them outside? You have to bring people with special blood like Guren to Konoha and send them to ninja schools. You can't learn anything there. This is not equivalent to leaving it in the open and hoping that Danzo will snatch it away.
Extremely childish and insulting to IQ. The protagonist looks like a fool.
If you don't have the strength, you should keep a low profile.
Give up, don't look anymore. It's uncomfortable to carry your head around.
Give you a six-star review
Report it all to Naruto, Konoha, etc. I wonder if you still like to push it?
Congratulations to the author for it being released soon
@author Ten recommended tickets and one monthly ticket total. On the shelves Are you ready for the explosive chapter update? How many chapters are you preparing to base?
It was fine at the beginning, but as it went up the shelves, the writing became more and more the same as 💩. I can't read it anymore.
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