Immortality: Start by Creating Your Own Wine Poison

Chirp after chirp, day after day, author, where are you? You won't die, right?

It's really becoming more and more watery, and the quality is getting worse and worse.

The protagonist's combat power is a mystery. If he is strong, he can cross a big realm, but at a high price. If he is weak, the protagonist will not dare to fight if he is in the same realm and is several smaller realms stronger than the protagonist. The protagonist's technique says that he would be scared to death even if he fights a big realm, he has to pay the price. Is this technique very strong? There is also the cider made from the pulp of the world tree that the protagonist has. If he can't even break through a small realm, is he still a world tree? When the protagonist is weak, don't give it to the main character. The protagonist is in a small Gu world now. What is the use of giving the protagonist so many divine objects? The protagonist is only in a small place. You have written so many heaven-defying things, which are of no use to the protagonist. It is a waste of time to collect this and that. Also, the protagonist's Gu has been useless for so long. When I first started practicing, I said it was against the heaven. Now I don't use it in fighting anymore. I use clones. Won't the practice of this Gu be in vain?

It's really beautiful, please keep updating! ! It's really beautiful, please keep updating! ! It's really beautiful, please keep updating! !

It's not enough. Please update more. Why are you so stingy with one picture a day? How can you say that you update 10 pictures every day?

The cold wind blows in the lonely valley, and the cicadas chirp in the spring and autumn. The young man returns. At Danghun Mountain, the stone man sheds tears, and the fixed immortal wanders and the demon heads north. Thousands of immortals on the upstream river have retreated, and love has lost its hold on tears. Destined to succeed or fail, the Immortal will regret it but I will not. Cheers, author.

The protagonist can't stretch his hips anymore. He has the ability not to contribute to the family. Mr. Long can't make alchemy for so long. The protagonist doesn't know the tips or says he can do it. You are immortal but not invincible. You are too selfish and angry.

Are you a eunuch? ? ? ? Why isn't it updated? ? ?

If you want to stop updating until then, please update quickly.

I saw someone made some AI comics of this book and I thought it was okay. I came here to read the story. Let me talk about the shortcomings first. 1. There are too many descriptions of the reasons for this novel in the middle and later chapters (it doesn't matter if you write more narrations in the early chapters, but it will greatly affect the reading in the later stages). It is repeated over and over again. It is recommended that the simple logic in the later stages should be conveyed in concise words as much as possible, or expressed in scenes and character dialogues, etc. 2. Many of the basic logics of grade classification were not constructed in the early stage. From a rational point of view, there are many loopholes but the problem is not serious. There is no need to be too rigorous in following the Shuangwen route. However, it would seem a bit naive to suggest that you use less technology on the earth when writing the God Realm chapters in the later stages (unless you are very familiar with relevant professional theoretical knowledge and the development history of productivity technology in various historical periods. I really think it is wise to write about earth technology in the shipbuilding articles...), Otherwise it is enough to keep the vague concept and feel cool. There is no shortage of imaginary ideas to bring in earth technology in the later stage. First, Shuang's article explains the correct theory and the style of writing is not appropriate. Moreover, many people cannot understand the actual description. Secondly, the conceptual attributes in the article do not accurately reflect the theory of earth science and technology. Even ladders and clouds can be included. What does it have to do with Newton and Bernoulli? The Gu world comprehensively analyzes various levels of benchmarking technology, but the Trisolaran civilization is not the same dimension as 99% of the current technologies on the earth. 3. The biggest characteristic of entomologists is that they like to observe and record the attributes of various details of living things, summarize their experiences and open up the dimensions of recording (this is a related professional scientific thinking mode), and finally establish connections with other disciplines to form a system. This article only gives an introduction at the beginning and does not bring into the scientific thinking system (modern technology from small to large data It is a pity that the logical summary method is different from the ancient magical thinking: macroscopic view of microscopic view. In fact, when you have time, you can read a book written by a biologist and learn from the appearance description method. You can describe the appearance of three-dimensional voodoos. The latest chapters are full of toads, toads, and toads all day long. It makes me feel so uncomfortable to see them. Also, the protagonists are all voodoos in animal form. . . . . . Insects also have a lot of alien shapes that we can learn from. The so-called poison novels should be based on scary, thrilling, hair-raising, and novel elements. When I saw ginseng transforming into a little white rabbit, I was really convinced. . . . . Forget it, it's not a big problem. I don't want to make excessive suggestions. Let's keep the style consistent with the previous article.