My Taoism Comes from the World of Myths and Monsters

The Taoism obtained at the beginning is like a heretic, not authentic at all! There is no desire to look down!

Generally speaking, it's OK. The good points are: First, the subject matter is quite new. Secondly, this author still has some literary skills, that is, there are many things in history, Taoism, and some details. The people in the copies really understand what they wrote. The third thing is that I like some aspects of the world written in it. There are also bad places The first is the description of fighting and details (the character history and Taoism are very detailed), but the description of characters and fighting are very slow. Secondly, the writing is a bit depressing. It's not that I don't like this kind of writing, but my mind is already buzzing. When I read it like this, I felt even more buzzing. From the beginning, the positioning of this main world gave me the feeling that it is a world of demons and demons, including the protagonist's experience, which is not Xuanmen at all. Zong, it even gave me a weird feeling of cultivating immortals, but it was not weird, but it was layered layer by layer, and I couldn't breathe. Just the few Taoist temples around me were not good, including the people I knew were all people with bad intentions. Those who played ghost soldiers (the protagonist Taoist temple) played with corpses The answer is (the Taoist temple next door to the protagonist) and the one who plays with demons and bodies (the Taoist temple next to the protagonist) is said to be a Taoist, but the main world of the protagonist is full of monsters, ghosts and people, and there is no good one. People who like to watch it should like it. Anyway, I have seen too many behind-the-scenes videos recently. The main character is the same as Sun Tzu. He has always been Sun Tzu in the early, middle and late stages because the big bosses in the world are bad and have been playing around with the world. The class has become seriously solidified, and people die at every turn. It is normal for people to die casually after practicing for hundreds of years. I don't know what happened in the back of this book, but I have only seen three levels. Third, many of the characters are a bit childish in their writing and do not fit the scene at that time. For example, Chi Yang, who mentioned the third level, is a bit clever in his writing, but his behavior and inner thoughts are like those of a child.

I learned an eye-brightening technique, but then I didn't improve my practical experience and Taoxing. It just came out, but the opposite was the same as Jiangzhi. There was also an eye-brightening spell that increased my eyesight. It was like having prejudgment enabled. I'm really speechless. I haven't even traveled through time for a day. If I don't gain actual combat experience and don't attack first, if it weren't for the protagonist's aura, I really don't know how to survive. A good dungeon can be copied every day for a year. Just waste your time wandering around like this. This won't work unless you hit the streets.

The fighting is too vernacular, the Taoism, spells and scenes lack description, and you can't even write gorgeous words? The dialogues between the characters are not natural at all. Sometimes they are spoken in a modern way, and sometimes they are spoken in an ancient way. The supporting characters who are hundreds of years old have the IQ of a child. The machinations of the protagonist are too stiff, just like a child playing house. The protagonist has a golden finger, but the writing is too mediocre, too ordinary and a little bit Madonna-like, not exciting at all, and it seems dull and a bit frustrating

She is really old, suitable for eleven or twelve years old

The Thirty-Six Heavenly Powers: Mediating Fortune is probably the most difficult thing to cultivate

What was the story about the breakup with the Heavenly Master? It's really wise for a person who was slapped to death to give advice.

The scene where the disciples of the Taoist priests in Laoshan rebelled was like keeping a running account. The protagonist easily had several copycats come to help. These contents were mentioned in a few sentences, which was too casual and lacked a sense of substitution.

There's nothing worth reading, but at least you let me speak, which means you've written enough.

Is there a female protagonist? If so, single heroine or multiple heroines?