Celestial Officials

Chu Chen decided to follow the Taoist Master. After all, he only had the incomplete memories in his mind and a golden finger that he had not yet understood. The Taoist Master at least seemed to be more reliable.

A single poisonous spot can poison people to death. Everything was fine up to this point. But when I read Chapters 47 to 49, I was really struck by the poison. It was extremely poisonous. The mountain god was 'forced' to collaborate with the demons to kill more than hundreds of thousands of people because of their friendship. Then the court sent troops to arrest the incident. Everything was fine here, there was no poisonous spot, but then the three views were all gone. What I wrote is 🐶⑧, just when they were about to capture the mountain god, their sweetheart came and immediately stopped them. Then the two hugged each other and talked some nonsense, and then said they would commit suicide. They used their abilities to repay the sweetheart's fault. Just because of one person, the mountain god's sweetheart, more than hundreds of thousands of people died innocently because of this. Isn't the life of others life? Is it a pig or a dog? Is life like this🗡️? As a result, they didn't have to be sent to the eighteen levels of hell, but were reincarnated? If you want to continue the relationship again, don't be disgusting. If you can pay for it with your life, then life is really worthless than grass. This can also get 8 points. Withdraw, one poisonous point can poison people to death. What did you think of writing this kind of plot?

The gods and officials' envoys insult the text and play tricks, and those who are superior to their hands will be beheaded. Those who are promised by ghosts and gods are fractals. Those officials and envoys of the gods who were transferred to other posts without acknowledging their gratitude will be punished by needles and demoted to the humble envoys of the North Courtyard, where they will be commanded far away. Those who are summoned to devour demons and evil spirits and do not use up their demonic energy will receive a hundred staffs. The same goes for those who do not swallow up the sick energy for others. Those who are sent to set fire, iron and water to pour down the ghosts and gods, but do not possess it immediately, will be punished with a hundred staffs. Those who are not prepared for repeated calls will be punished by resisting the law. The gods and officials were sent to raise the corpses of the sick and detain the souls. Those who did not express their power urgently would be beheaded. Those who deliberately seek hardship are fractals. When the gods and officials saw that there were three corpses in the judge's body and nine insects causing disaster, they immediately punished him. Those who go against the grain will wander four thousand miles. The envoys of the gods and officials were imprisoned by the judge and surrendered to Tiancao. If they were restrained and intercepted by the emperor, they would be captured and tied up when they were unable to understand. Those who were sent to the heavenly prison would be beheaded. The officials and messengers of the gods who have been deceived by the immortal officials of the Five Mountains and Four Mountains and have the status of righteous gods will be punished by needle if they comment on the incident and fail to report it to the judge in time. The gods and officials send their congratulations to the five mountains, four famous mountains and rivers, the gods and officials, and the judge reports the memorial and pays homage to him in person. If he fails to notify and report in time, he shall be guilty of the previous crime. Those who are sent by the gods and officials to search for the bones and spirits but do not retaliate according to their location shall be punished according to the rules of the law. The officials and envoys of the gods were responsible for judging ghosts and gods, but they did not make excuses for their duties. They only lasted for six years. Those who betray their duties and those who are not in their duties will be beheaded everywhere. If the envoys of the gods encounter someone who has been sent by the judge to station elsewhere, they must verify the judge's monogram seal and ask the judge about the god he trusts before they can go there. Violators will be demoted to three official positions. Those who bear the words will be beheaded. Even though the officials and envoys of the gods were sent by heaven to station in other places, they were always accompanied by a thousand elite guards and the iron city was covered with iron, and they were not allowed to leave. Violators will be sentenced to nine years in prison, and the leader will be fractal. The gods, officials, and envoys accompanied the judge to pay homage to the court. They waited outside the Tianmen and were not allowed to disperse. Violators will be demoted. The leader will be beheaded. When the envoys of the gods and officials met with the judge's messengers to submit written documents and ultimatums, they would tear them apart along the way and stay there for a while. Those who polished and defaced the documents would be beheaded. The gods and officials use the talismans to make heaven and earth pardon the day and prevent the ghosts and gods in the prison from being hunted or captured. Violators will be beheaded. It is wrong to be a wooden guest or a mandrill. When the gods and officials see the officials sent by heaven to interview the good and evil of the people and to investigate the deeds of the judges, they are not allowed to submit their evil records. Violators will be sentenced to seven years in prison. If the envoys of the gods and officials hear that someone has violated the law and is not covered by the law, they will rely on the judge to weigh the severity of the crime and decide the crime.

When I wrote more than forty chapters, there was a scene between the goddess Qingshan and Mr. Qingyun (the two were lovers), and the emotions were described. Let me briefly talk about the plot, that is, Mr. Qingyun's soul was scattered in order to seek the golden elixir to become an immortal, leaving only a little remnant of his soul. Then, in order to save him, the goddess Qingshan teamed up with the demon and stole the souls of hundreds of thousands of people, causing these hundreds of thousands of people to die early. After being discovered, the protagonist group attacked the goddess, but later the gentleman came out and stopped all this. Here's the key point. When the couple posted each other and expressed their feelings, the article describes that everyone in the protagonist group was moved by them (some people say that being moved and being punished are two different things, but you have to have a prerequisite for being moved. In the final analysis, this gentleman has found this end for himself. No wonder others, those hundreds of thousands of people are simply disasters from the sky. How can you be moved by the feelings of these two people? Ah? I almost want to kill a hundred people directly), and in the end, without describing what achievements this Mr. Qingyun has, what he has done for the world, what he has done for the people, why he can arouse people's respect, etc., He just said that he was a third-grade official, a great scholar, and a great Confucian at that time. After that, the protagonist and the group of people shouted: Mr. Qiangu, and then the common people also shouted: Mr. Qiangu, I said:? ? ? , Those hundreds of thousands of people:? ? ? It's outrageous, too rigid, and doesn't resonate well with readers. Instead, it makes the comments section noisy and expresses emotions too much! It looks very disgusting. What would happen if your life was shortened by a few years or more? What they lost was the feeling of love

After meeting the Taoist Master, Chu Chen not only recovered his body, but also triggered the golden finger. In this strange world, this was great news for Chu Chen.

This emotional scene is so awkward. Why don't you call me Erlang?

The protagonist's IQ is very good at first, but it gets lower as time goes by. Investigating monsters requires a little kid, without any judgment of his own. Just imagine, you go to check if there is any problem with a family, and the monster channel is still wide open at this time. It is easy for problems to occur. What does the protagonist do? He goes directly to an elder of the family and asks him if there is any problem in your family. He is told that there is no problem, and then the protagonist concludes that there is no problem, without any judgment of his own. There's no logic at all.

A description of a method that is difficult to understand and does not affect the plot... Is it written just for the sake of numbers or to make readers think that this method is noble? When I first started reading it, I had the mentality of giving it a try, but the description of the method took up almost a thousand words in one chapter, which was completely nutritious and really boring to read. There may be some book friends who are cultivators who will practice according to the above content, but it is really not suitable for some normal readers. Keep up the good work!

When Chu Chen traveled through time and found that he had turned into a donkey, he almost doubted his life. Fortunately, he later discovered that he was actually a human being, but he had just been affected by the animal-creation technique.

The author has a really poor sense of time. No matter what, the protagonist's cultivation time is only a few months, half a year, or one year. His cultivation level is rising rapidly, mainly because the protagonist's friends are considered to be peerless geniuses per capita according to the protagonist's time, and there are several peerless geniuses in a remote and remote place. Just understand everything. Let's talk about that time. If you look carefully, you will find that "two or three months of cultivation time" appears more than once, and then there is something in between each time. The protagonist's own time has stopped, right? From what I have seen, the description of the protagonist rising to level 9 is about one to two months, and then going through a lot of things. There are also descriptions of time such as a week or several days, and then there is a description of having nothing to do for nearly a month. I simply calculated it and it has been three or four months. From another point of view, it is like the monthly salary. If I remember correctly, I got it three or four times. In the end, the protagonist accompanied the master to work in the county. The description of the cultivation time is only two months? ? ? After seeing this, I lost all desire to read further.