From the Beginning of the Battle to the Top

The author should consider letting Queen Medusa evolve into a colorful sky-swallowing python, erase her intelligence, and then form a master-servant blood contract with Qinglin. I really don't like some fanfics in which the protagonist kneels down and licks Medusa even though he is very strong.

I see you have been planning for a long time, but I still don't know what it is? The moment I saw it was Gu Yu, my whole body cracked. In the early stage, no one paid attention to the Xiao family except Gu Xun'er. Well, why don't we just go to the Xiao family to find Xiao Zhan? There is also the Yunlan Sect Medusa, who has been planning and scheming here, and has not seen any benefits for herself. Instead, she has been helping others and benefiting others. It's really a high-end and a low-end.

The plans in the book are really ridiculous, and I don't feel like they have any brains at all. The whole story is about the protagonist doing whatever he wants, and then everything just ends in a blur? ? Moreover, you are already fighting the king, and you still go to the little medical fairy, Qing Lin, and say that you can become your helper in the future. It is really ridiculous. You are so lustful, and you are a helper.

It's really a joke that the protagonist, the Seven-Star Dou King, fights the Six-Star Dou King. Originally, Dou King Dou King is a big segment, and the protagonist doesn't have any awesome trump cards. He can only see through the strange fire and the secret technique to improve his strength, but all these combined just make the protagonist fight the three-star Dou King. Isn't beating the six-star Dou King a court of death? If Xiao Yan can surpass more than ten levels of fighting sect, why can't the protagonist? He has two golden fingers, Buddha's Furious Lotus and Yao Lao's Upper Body. How can the protagonist compare? It can be seen from the draw between the one-star fighting master Xiao Yan and the two-star fighting master Naran Yanran in the original work that there is no need to use Buddha's Furious Lotus to win or lose, so Xiao Yan is only two or three levels higher without using his trump card.

I don't know how you feel about this book. I feel that this book, The Wind Rises from the Green Mountains and The Rebirth of Dou Po, Liu Xi, follow the same path. The Rebirth of Dou Po, Liu Xi, was written earlier, and Medusa didn't handle it well, but she chose to suppress Huo Huo. The Wind Rises from the Green Mountains It's a bit fast (?) And this book feels similar to Liu Xi's book. It has an extra link with the Soul Palace, which is the icing on the cake. It loses the plot of suppressing the fire and instead has a plot similar to taking the blame, but generally the feeling is the same.

Even before the Fighting Emperor, you want to create earth-level fighting skills. If you can create a yellow-level fighting skill, you are considered awesome. The protagonist has only seen a lot of fighting skills and wants to create fighting skills. Does he have that kind of background? Many fighting emperors do not have earth-level fighting skills.

It's not as brainless as those in the Invincible genre. It respects and pays enough attention to the settings of the original work. The protagonist's behavior and settings are consistent with each other. It's rich in interesting points. It's a rare masterpiece!

It is said that the protagonist has no cheats, but everything he does can only be done by a cheat, especially the wish-granting cheat, which makes the protagonist unfavorable in planning😑

In my opinion, the protagonist just thinks he is a smart person, thinking that he can control everything if he knows the direction of the plot, and he actually plans to take advantage of Gu Xun'er. In fact, it is nothing, and he doesn't even know how much he weighs. The Jiama Empire got the strange fire and Yao Lao and exchanged their martial arts and fighting skills, leaving the last The most important thing is not the Emperor Jade. Only by grabbing a piece of Emperor Jade can the follow-up plan have a chance to succeed. Then the most important thing is to join the Danta in Zhongzhou as soon as possible to improve the strength. Instead of talking about controlling emotions while going to find the green-scaled little medical fairy, or even joining the Snake Tribe, what are you doing? If it's not just to find women to open a harem, what resources does the Jiama Empire have in a bigger place? Is staying here a complete waste of time, or do you have to wait for Xiao Yan to catch up?

Many plots always disgust me unintentionally. The goal of this book is clear, but the road is indeed crooked. I really don't understand what you get by calculating and calculating. And if you plot against others, don't be emotional, otherwise you are not a human being inside and out. Alas, you are not suitable for writing plots about plotting against others. The protagonist of your book makes me feel very stupid. He always complicates simple things. (This book always makes me famous)