
Give Me More
by Tell The Truth Through Falsehood
About This Novel
Introduction: Lingyuan's method of cultivating immortals and the theory of Taiyi Dao. Karma and luck say, I will hold the door to immortality. This is a story in which the protagonist uses plug-ins to understand the method of cultivation, understand the laws of the universe, and achieve immortality, immortality, and eternity.
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Official(19)Scraped 1mo ago
Is there any mistake?
The author probably has no such life experience. Does the butcher kill pigs by stabbing the heart? If you buy a pig heart, you will know that the pig heart is not stabbed. The pig hearts sold by others are all intact and without wounds. Pigs are killed by stabbing the main arteries in their necks and bleeding them to death.
Too watery
The subject matter is good. You can read more of the author. Novels with a similar style to yours, especially those with better grades. I usually read novels to look at the details because I listen to them. You are too stupid and I can't read it. You successfully persuaded me to quit.
The author writes a book for the first time and likes to ramble
There are a lot of unnecessary descriptions, which makes me feel very verbose.
How should I put it? It's not a completely enjoyable novel. It pursues too much the logic of the cultivation system and has too little plot description, resulting in the characters not feeling very full. Come on, focus less on the logic of cultivation. Logic in fantasy is inherently unscientific, so just a little bit of meaning is enough. I prefer to watch the plot (づ ●─● )づ.
Too watery,
Sometimes it's enough to explain it in detail, without writing it in detail. For example, Chapter 22 can obviously be solved in a few paragraphs, and it has to be a single chapter.
very good
Both the plot and the idea are very good, come on
Damn it, this author can't grasp the key point. He has to describe everything.
. . . . .
If you think about it this way. . The human body is a small world. The Qi of the human body can also be said to be oxygen. After all, we cannot live without oxygen. The human body is like the heaven and the earth. Do we need oxygen for the movement of the heaven and the earth? The movement of the earth and the heavens also requires energy. The human body uses the energy of the outer world to move the inner heaven and earth, absorbing energy from the earth. . . So is the movement of the earth also absorbing energy from the universe? . . . If you think about it this way, the energy of the universe can act on the earth, then can it be said that the energy in the universe can also be used on the human body? . . . Because the human body's survival energy comes from the earth's nature, the earth's energy comes from the universe, and the natural human body's energy ultimately comes from the universe. . Shouldn't the evolutionary development of human beings be about receiving the energy of the universe? It is not that human beings cannot accept the radiation of cosmic energy, but that the human body was born on the earth and innately needs acquired energy molecules synthesized with the oxygen of the earth's atmosphere. . . Has the direction of human development been wrong a long time ago? ? ? Who has been guiding mankind to avoid cosmic energy? Do they serve any purpose?
So beautiful! Why is it gone?
Can the author continue writing? I'm very curious about what's behind it!
I was wondering, where did the first one go? It's time for the second picture. Could it be that the author ate it?
Rating
Community(0)
Official(19)Scraped 1mo ago
Is there any mistake?
The author probably has no such life experience. Does the butcher kill pigs by stabbing the heart? If you buy a pig heart, you will know that the pig heart is not stabbed. The pig hearts sold by others are all intact and without wounds. Pigs are killed by stabbing the main arteries in their necks and bleeding them to death.
Too watery
The subject matter is good. You can read more of the author. Novels with a similar style to yours, especially those with better grades. I usually read novels to look at the details because I listen to them. You are too stupid and I can't read it. You successfully persuaded me to quit.
The author writes a book for the first time and likes to ramble
There are a lot of unnecessary descriptions, which makes me feel very verbose.
How should I put it? It's not a completely enjoyable novel. It pursues too much the logic of the cultivation system and has too little plot description, resulting in the characters not feeling very full. Come on, focus less on the logic of cultivation. Logic in fantasy is inherently unscientific, so just a little bit of meaning is enough. I prefer to watch the plot (づ ●─● )づ.
Too watery,
Sometimes it's enough to explain it in detail, without writing it in detail. For example, Chapter 22 can obviously be solved in a few paragraphs, and it has to be a single chapter.
very good
Both the plot and the idea are very good, come on
Damn it, this author can't grasp the key point. He has to describe everything.
. . . . .
If you think about it this way. . The human body is a small world. The Qi of the human body can also be said to be oxygen. After all, we cannot live without oxygen. The human body is like the heaven and the earth. Do we need oxygen for the movement of the heaven and the earth? The movement of the earth and the heavens also requires energy. The human body uses the energy of the outer world to move the inner heaven and earth, absorbing energy from the earth. . . So is the movement of the earth also absorbing energy from the universe? . . . If you think about it this way, the energy of the universe can act on the earth, then can it be said that the energy in the universe can also be used on the human body? . . . Because the human body's survival energy comes from the earth's nature, the earth's energy comes from the universe, and the natural human body's energy ultimately comes from the universe. . Shouldn't the evolutionary development of human beings be about receiving the energy of the universe? It is not that human beings cannot accept the radiation of cosmic energy, but that the human body was born on the earth and innately needs acquired energy molecules synthesized with the oxygen of the earth's atmosphere. . . Has the direction of human development been wrong a long time ago? ? ? Who has been guiding mankind to avoid cosmic energy? Do they serve any purpose?
So beautiful! Why is it gone?
Can the author continue writing? I'm very curious about what's behind it!
I was wondering, where did the first one go? It's time for the second picture. Could it be that the author ate it?










