Immortal Path Ordinary Cultivation

This kind of plot, you think you have too many readers, are you trying to kill two of them? It's so disgusting, it's already been chapter 37, and it's still like this

The protagonist is a bit stupid and has to find a father for himself

There are a lot of poisonous points, and you can read them in the early stage, but it starts to get outrageous in the 300th chapter. The characters have changed too much. Although the growth path has changed, the preface does not match the follower, and the sense of division is too strong. In the previous chapter, I was cautious, modest, and respectful, but in the next chapter, I will criticize at will. Chapter The progress is also very stilted. The most important thing is that the relationship between the characters is not handled well, so that all the women have to surround the protagonist. The progress is not well written, and the final character creation is also not good. The plot is also very sloppy, and the more you watch, the more poisonous it becomes. There is also forced intelligence-destroying behavior to promote the plot, which is too abstract.

I stayed up late and read more than a hundred chapters. I couldn't stand it anymore when I saw the fight with the sect in more than 100 chapters. In the early stage, the protagonist knew almost no one in the sect. There are no good people in the whole sect. Only the protagonist and the old man are good people. It's too deliberate.

It's a bit toxic, I couldn't even finish Chapter 13. Those who can draw talismans in the void are definitely not ordinary magic weapons. You are only at the first level of Qi training. If you don't cut the grass and root out the roots, Shi Shan turned around and said, Senior Brother He has to come to you to ask for it, and the others will do it directly.

I traveled here with my friends and found this book. The title of the book exudes a strange light. I said this book is very poisonous and must not be read. My friend, who believed that he was a Mahayana practitioner and had the blood of Shennong, said, "You can tell from the name of this book that it is poisonous. No one in the world has tasted it and does not know its nature. I am a descendant of Shennong and my cultivation is as high as the heavens. What should I fear? Today I will follow the example of my ancestors and taste a hundred herbs." Then I opened the book and all my friends and I admired his courage. There was an immortal who wanted to write a poem for the warrior. But I never expected that in just a split second, my friend would scream in agony after just looking at one page of the book, and everyone would be horrified! His seven orifices were bleeding, his face was ferocious, he was vomiting blood in his mouth, and his whole body instantly became withered and thin. He quickly took out the elixir and let him take it, but before he could save him, he was unable to save him. When my friend was dying, he only left one sentence: "This book is more poisonous than the Zhi Shi Jian." Then he turned into ashes and left. Only then did I remember that the ancients said that even the Daluo Immortals can't save you. Everyone lamented that the ancients never deceived me. At this point, I would like to advise everyone who does not have Daluo Jinxian cultivation to not watch and leave quickly. Don't forcefully pretend to be cool. I hope those who come after me must remember this!

Forcibly reducing intelligence has many poisonous points. Is it so easy for others to see a person's spiritual age? Is it necessary for a sect with dozens of golden elixirs to be threatened by a foundation-building monk and expel its own genius? The head of a sect cannot even protect his own relatives and even his own granddaughter is threatened. Why should he be ranked with others? Doesn't cultivating immortality not talk about combining verticality and connecting horizontally at all? It's okay for two families to fight against one family! It doesn't count as brainless and cool, it should be considered erratic, and the characters' personalities are also a mess. Sometimes they are smart and sometimes they are confused. They just follow the author's random writing.

In fairy tales, other authors continue to use low-grade spiritual stones, medium-grade spiritual stones, and high-grade spiritual stones, and readers are used to it. Why do you have to go so far as to create a concept of broken spiritual stones, to show that your brain circuit is superior to those authors? After reading a few chapters, I really had goosebumps everywhere.

It's an old book, but it has a lot of poisonous points. I don't recommend reading it.

The content is rich and well written. The writing is smooth. Keep up the hard work. Come on.