Three Kingdoms: Spoilers for the Future, Han Ling Emperor Collapsed

It's so important to read during the new book period. Please don't keep the book. Please read more. When it's on the shelves, feel free to keep the book. Please!

I'll give it 5 stars first because the 48 chapters are well written. However, I have a few comments: One: Write more about other people's reactions after learning about the historical events. The dramatic tension is not enough. It feels like Liu Hong is the beauty. Please give some other people's reactions! Take the historical flash point of Wu Hu Luan Hua. For the people of the Han Dynasty, this was a stress point. When Jia Xu, the old turtle, got this news, it would definitely not be so plain. Also, your description of Wu Hu Luan Hua was too bland. Based on what you said, it is difficult for Liu Hong and Jia Xu to think how miserable Wu Hu Luan Hua was. The most they could imagine was the scenes of war after Wang Mang fled to the Han Dynasty. But what kind of scene was Wu Hu Luan Hua? It can be said that people at least in the Jin Dynasty could not imagine the scene. This can be seen by referring to the literature and art before the Jin Dynasty. The paintings describing hell are all about beheading and killing people, carving out people's hearts and burning them, etc. But after the Five Husty Rebellion, cannibalism is no longer covert. It can be seen that the Wuhu Rebellion is miserable. When I saw this, I thought you would have a small climax, but I didn't expect that the plot was quite bland. Two: There should be fewer retellings of historical plots, try to use... You told a story with a table, and try to use familiar histories... Representatives have said that you can write down the unpopular ones, the unofficial ones, and the ones that are different from the novels. But when you write like this, it feels like reading a history book. Most of the chapters are documents, and the plot interaction is dry. If the time traveler didn't see Liu Hong's creativity, it would be difficult to watch. After all, the purpose of reading your book is to see Liu Hong's reaction after learning about this, not to read the historical documents you wrote. You can write these things, but these things must be able to stimulate Liu Hong, and then Liu Hong will react, so that there is a sense of interaction, otherwise just do it. Three: Hurry up and add people who can interact. It was not easy to add Jia Xu, but you wrote it as if it were transparent, but this combines with Jia Xu's character, and I can't say you. But you must add one or two historical figures to increase the sense of interaction, otherwise the plot will be too dry and become a popular science historical text. Do you know why spoiler articles like to write about the Ming Dynasty? Because Zhu Yuanzhang's family can interact with each other no matter what, whether it's Zhu Yuanzhang getting angry and beating Zhu Di, Zhu Biao protecting his fourth brother, other little pigs watching the show and encouraging trouble, or Queen Ma suppressing everyone, there is a story. But you have written almost 50 chapters, and there are only three people: Yan Yi Liu Hong, a transparent turtle Jia Xu, and a dispensable Jian Shuo. They are all interactions between the protagonist and Liu Hong. Four: The next plot should be that Liu Hong has made up his mind to reform, so everything from historical trends to minor court changes must be written about! It's a pity that you didn't write about the Yellow Turbans earlier. For example, the interaction between Huangfu Song and Dong Zhuo, Lu Zhi and Liu Bei, etc., Such as how Liu Bei recruited his two brothers after being recruited, how they fought against the Yellow Turbans, etc. In fact, the content of your 48 chapters alone, in a historical novel, would be at least 200,000 words. The first climax of the book comes, and it does not end until the climax of catching Zhang Jue. I hope you can write more detailedly later. After all, the entire history has been changed since Chapter 48. Write more about other things, such as the game between Liu Hong and the courtiers, the game between the aristocratic families, etc.

It's quite good, but there are too few new ones. Written like this, Liu Hong will be the emperor through the ages. I feel like I have a system mission with Liu Hong later, and I don't want to think about what will happen next.

Look at the Three Heroes of the Late Han Dynasty, in addition to suppressing gold, there was no such person in the civil war. In the entire late Han Dynasty, if these three Diao Mao were so awesome, people behind them would not fail to pay attention to and use them. However, after the gold was struck, they went to the emperor, and the civil war began. The Three Heroes of the Late Han Dynasty, with such awesome titles, why didn't they support the generals of the building and reverse the chaos of the country! Is it unwilling or unable! The title of "Three Heroes of the Late Han Dynasty" is just to give them a dignified exit. If they are reused, hey, I can only call them mediocre!

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This book is quite good and I can give it a good review

This guy is not a good person, and I urge everyone not to read his books. He is just a guy with sores on his head and pus on his soles. He is a bad guy who always makes people feel appetizing and ends hastily. Author, go and wash it! ! ! ! !