I Originally Wanted to Vote for the Wei Dynasty, but Why Did I Return to the Han Dynasty?

I want to give the author some advice, you have to create something exciting. Since the protagonist is not Liu Bei, but Lu Wan, you should give the protagonist strength. In these troubled times, there are too many opportunities for performance. The protagonist should be famous all over the world instead of just paying silently. In this case, it is better to change the title from the beginning and let the protagonist Lu originally wanted to have sex with Liu Bei, just like Shao Song, the writing was good, but it still had to give Zhao Jiu a halo of personal charm and make the world fall in love with him, instead of just writing a running account. The conflict between the various forces is not equal to the conflict of the protagonist himself, and without this kind of conflict, there would be less to watch. A lot. After all, we are writing novels, so we should write them in a novel way. I think if you have to approach Shuangwen to some extent, otherwise, if you want to write a novel with some depth at the beginning, it will be easy to collapse. I roughly read a hundred thousand words. If you just add buf to Liu Bei's power f. However, the protagonist seems to be invisible. There is really no sense of immersion in Jin Yi Ye Xing. Any modern person who travels to ancient times will inevitably have a sense of world affairs that he has to do on his own. Such a feeling of self-confidence and self-improvement. Try to set as few des for the protagonist as possible that will affect the writing. Buff, such as character disadvantages and ideological limitations, can easily make you feel constrained when writing later, and you find that you can't solve the previous points, and the subsequent plot is difficult to arrange. It is recommended that you use a passive way to let the protagonist appear in the world, and no one can appear in front of him. To be honest, it is not a novel that attracts readers, and readers are your biggest source of motivation.

There are countless poisonous points in strategy and tactics. I can only say that it makes sense to pounce.

As the title says, I'm still updating, but because it's not in the latest chapter, what's shown is the previously updated stuff. I'm still writing!

The current plot is a bit delayed and the viewing experience is not good. If you want, I can fast forward to Yuan Jun's march south. I don't know what your opinions are.

There are some problems with the latest chapter. I plan to revise it. If you have any thoughts and opinions, please let me know.

This novel is well written, but no one reads it.

Not bad, high-quality food and grass. I'll update it soon. It's too short.

It's interesting to read the introduction, so I'll save it first. Come on, author!