From Chishui Orphan to Jibi Martial Saint

The author constructs a magnificent world, in which human beings build a basic order based on oaths. Military force, hundreds of schools of thought, technology, etc. Complement each other. Aliens, mythical creatures, and ghosts are everywhere. The elements are complex and extremely difficult to control. This world started when Sima broke his oath, showing the price of breach of contract in the most tragic way. There is conflict from the first chapter. The first volume is well written, especially the climax design at the end of the volume is great. The disadvantage is that some of the early descriptions are too simple in order to quickly launch the climax. The second volume expands on a lot of the foreshadowing of the first volume, which feels good, but there are still a few obvious main lines of foreshadowing buried deep inside. The design idea of ​​the secret realm is very good, but the specific plot of the secret realm seems to still have room for improvement. The ending of the second volume really touched me. The meaning of the four major oaths and the flesh-and-blood experiences of some supporting characters made me feel that this is a real world, and this is also the most exciting part for me so far. Generally speaking, comparing the later period of the second volume with the first volume, the author's writing skills have improved significantly, and the description of various plots has become more and more empathetic. I hope the third volume can be written better.