
Time Loop: Captured by Six Doors at the Beginning
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The indestructible Vajra of the Maha Temple is unparalleled in the world, and the jade edict of the Immortal Realm of the Zhenwu Sect follows the law. This era is noisy and lively. As soon as Chu Qianqiu crossed over, he was arrested by Six Doors and brought to justice. And all he relied on was a mediocre golden finger. "System, restart me." Traveling through the cycle of time and space, returning to 24 hours ago. Just give me one day and I will be the best in the world. ......... The following is the first version of the introduction: North and South stand side by side, and Buddhism and Taoism compete. During the Shenwu Dynasty, the Maha Temple was honored, and there was the Arhat Vajra, which suppressed the fate of the country, brought over all living beings, and demonstrated the vastness of Buddhism. The Great Xia Dynasty was proud of the True Martial Sect, which had true immortals and generals who controlled the destiny of heaven, blessed the common people, and demonstrated the boundless power of Taoism. There is also the Confucian sect who lives high in the temple and has disciples of saints and herdsmen who govern the world and vow to restore the ancient ways. In a time of great strife, heroes rise together. There are born Buddhist sons, there are banished immortals who descend to the earth, there are saints with imperial destiny, there are undefeated famous generals, there are world-destroying demon fetuses, there are sword madmen, there are orphans of heroes, there are evil stars, there are hateful goddesses, there are Buddhas, demons and evil spirits... There are endless talents, monsters and talents, countless. But Chu Qianqiu was only a son of a hundred families, an apprentice in a martial arts hall, and a martial artist. Ever since he traveled through time and landed in this boiling era, he was forced to be involved in a terrifying whirlpool. The only things he could rely on were the sword in his hand and the time loop system that allowed him to return to the past within 24 hours. "I only have one life. If I die, I will die." "But if you don't kill me within 24 hours." "Then no matter how many generations come, I will defeat you!"
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Self-evaluation letter
On the morning of July 20, the editor sent an urgent message, which educated me to the depths of my soul. After listening to it, I was sweating, my laziness recovered, and I felt ashamed inside, so I wrote a post to remember it, so that I can reflect on myself. The editor said: I always remind you to update at least twice a day. You sometimes update once and sometimes twice. What position do you put the readers? If you don't write diligently, how can you dream about achieving results? Isn't this just a dream? Me: trembling, terrified, not daring to say a word. The editor said again: At least two updates are the key to my day and night advice. If you are suffering from laziness, it is better not to write. Don't learn the nonsense of idiots. Does a one-time beast deserve to have achievements? Me: Sweating profusely, terrified, I hurriedly said yes. The editor then said: And your article must be written carefully to make it comfortable for readers. Now I have written 50,000 words, but tens of thousands of words cannot serve readers well. It will definitely be doomed in the future. You must sort it out yourself first, and take a look at it after you finish it. Don't throw all garbage in front of readers. Me: May I ask what went wrong with the editor and made it uncomfortable for readers? The editor said: The reading figures are getting worse and worse, plummeting, and it looks like it is going to be finished. If there is something that cannot be said, it is not possible here, and neither is that. I suggest you change the name of the protagonist to the four characters "Master Reader", and taste it carefully to see what the difference is. Me: The editor really had a clever idea. I replaced the protagonist's name with Mr. Reader. After careful review, I found many problems. The editor said again: I just realized it now, it's too late, now it's a life and death situation, I must cheer up, work hard to update, improve the quality, and then apologize to the readers. The above content has been adapted by me and has become fictitious. If there is any coincidence, it is purely the same. But what the editor said today really shocked me. The first one is that it is not professional enough and does not take the career of online articles seriously enough. It always feels that one update or two updates are just updates, but it does not take into account the readers' experience of following updates. We need to reflect on this carefully. The second is that the content is not well controlled and the writing is not enjoyable. Although this is an enjoyable article, some parts of the content are obviously problematic. After listening to the editor's words, I am still ready to cheer up and hope to write better. One final word The current reading data is indeed very poor. I am not good enough in writing, and I am not qualified to ask readers to follow it. However, if readers feel uncomfortable in any way, they can point it out and I will try to correct it. Thank you again for taking the time to read, and I hope this is a novel that doesn't feel like a waste of time.
This book is quite interesting to write
It has its own world view, upgrade system, and social conflict, which is quite interesting.
A letter to a reader friend
If there are new friends coming, I can explain a few points here. First, the world view will be relatively new. I have put a lot of effort into the training system and martial arts design. It is suitable for those who like high-level martial arts and interesting martial arts. Second, the time loop system The protagonist will not really suffer, it is just a dilemma designed at the beginning. Third, the layout is still carefully designed. Friends who like to see the layout can also watch it. Fourth, the overall story is quite innovative. I ask myself that the writing is quite serious, and every setting is taken seriously. Fifth, I am quite diligent in updating, usually three times a day. 8 A. M., 12 Noon, and 6 p. M. So every reader is welcome to come and watch Finally, if you think the writing is good, please support it, such as giving a subscription or something. This is the only assessment standard by which an author's work can be measured. This will give your work a chance to gain more exposure. Thank you to every reader for your support
Since it was put on the shelves, today is the first recommendation. I hope everyone will support it.
Since I am on the vane today, although it is a small recommendation, I will add another chapter. Friends who like it, I hope you can subscribe and support it so that you can have a chance to get a second recommendation next time. Thank you very much for your support along the way.
Bad review
I've read eight chapters and I really can't stand it anymore. Bad review.
Really good
Overall, it's pretty good, the logic is reasonable, and the world view design is innovative. Except for the long title, which may cause you to not want to read it after just one glance at the title, I asked AI to randomly select a tag, and then I chose the one that I liked in the rankings😣😣😣. The harem story is also written in a moderate way so that it won't make people feel uncomfortable. In terms of plot, the cycle type of novel is indeed a difficult type of novel to write. The most feared thing is that the author will conflict with what he writes, but the author still manages the plot very smoothly. Regarding cheats, we have made the best use of everything and have relatively few restrictions. Some other novels have too many restrictions on cheats. Finally, there is the ending. All the big holes that need to be filled are filled, and the small ones are forgotten. After all, time loops. As long as the personal purpose is reasonable, even if it is made up now. That's probably it.
Suddenly it occurred to me that if the main foot got a one-day treasure, wouldn't it be possible to refresh it infinitely, and then refresh it 24 hours after eating it?
Prepare a new version of the introduction, let's see how it goes
The indestructible Vajra of the Maha Temple is unparalleled in the world, and the jade edict of the Immortal Realm of the Zhenwu Sect follows the law. This era is noisy and lively. As soon as Chu Qianqiu crossed over, he was arrested by Six Doors and brought to justice. And he only has a mediocre golden finger. "System, restart it." Travel through the endless loop and go back to 24 hours ago. Just give me one day and I will be the best in the world
After reading a little bit, why does the protagonist have to take risks all the time to level up? Isn't it bad? It's not that Goldfinger has restrictions or can't bring items and levels.
Chapter 814, approved
It hasn't been modified much. It must have been mistakenly released by reviewers.
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Official(17)Scraped 11d ago
Self-evaluation letter
On the morning of July 20, the editor sent an urgent message, which educated me to the depths of my soul. After listening to it, I was sweating, my laziness recovered, and I felt ashamed inside, so I wrote a post to remember it, so that I can reflect on myself. The editor said: I always remind you to update at least twice a day. You sometimes update once and sometimes twice. What position do you put the readers? If you don't write diligently, how can you dream about achieving results? Isn't this just a dream? Me: trembling, terrified, not daring to say a word. The editor said again: At least two updates are the key to my day and night advice. If you are suffering from laziness, it is better not to write. Don't learn the nonsense of idiots. Does a one-time beast deserve to have achievements? Me: Sweating profusely, terrified, I hurriedly said yes. The editor then said: And your article must be written carefully to make it comfortable for readers. Now I have written 50,000 words, but tens of thousands of words cannot serve readers well. It will definitely be doomed in the future. You must sort it out yourself first, and take a look at it after you finish it. Don't throw all garbage in front of readers. Me: May I ask what went wrong with the editor and made it uncomfortable for readers? The editor said: The reading figures are getting worse and worse, plummeting, and it looks like it is going to be finished. If there is something that cannot be said, it is not possible here, and neither is that. I suggest you change the name of the protagonist to the four characters "Master Reader", and taste it carefully to see what the difference is. Me: The editor really had a clever idea. I replaced the protagonist's name with Mr. Reader. After careful review, I found many problems. The editor said again: I just realized it now, it's too late, now it's a life and death situation, I must cheer up, work hard to update, improve the quality, and then apologize to the readers. The above content has been adapted by me and has become fictitious. If there is any coincidence, it is purely the same. But what the editor said today really shocked me. The first one is that it is not professional enough and does not take the career of online articles seriously enough. It always feels that one update or two updates are just updates, but it does not take into account the readers' experience of following updates. We need to reflect on this carefully. The second is that the content is not well controlled and the writing is not enjoyable. Although this is an enjoyable article, some parts of the content are obviously problematic. After listening to the editor's words, I am still ready to cheer up and hope to write better. One final word The current reading data is indeed very poor. I am not good enough in writing, and I am not qualified to ask readers to follow it. However, if readers feel uncomfortable in any way, they can point it out and I will try to correct it. Thank you again for taking the time to read, and I hope this is a novel that doesn't feel like a waste of time.
This book is quite interesting to write
It has its own world view, upgrade system, and social conflict, which is quite interesting.
A letter to a reader friend
If there are new friends coming, I can explain a few points here. First, the world view will be relatively new. I have put a lot of effort into the training system and martial arts design. It is suitable for those who like high-level martial arts and interesting martial arts. Second, the time loop system The protagonist will not really suffer, it is just a dilemma designed at the beginning. Third, the layout is still carefully designed. Friends who like to see the layout can also watch it. Fourth, the overall story is quite innovative. I ask myself that the writing is quite serious, and every setting is taken seriously. Fifth, I am quite diligent in updating, usually three times a day. 8 A. M., 12 Noon, and 6 p. M. So every reader is welcome to come and watch Finally, if you think the writing is good, please support it, such as giving a subscription or something. This is the only assessment standard by which an author's work can be measured. This will give your work a chance to gain more exposure. Thank you to every reader for your support
Since it was put on the shelves, today is the first recommendation. I hope everyone will support it.
Since I am on the vane today, although it is a small recommendation, I will add another chapter. Friends who like it, I hope you can subscribe and support it so that you can have a chance to get a second recommendation next time. Thank you very much for your support along the way.
Bad review
I've read eight chapters and I really can't stand it anymore. Bad review.
Really good
Overall, it's pretty good, the logic is reasonable, and the world view design is innovative. Except for the long title, which may cause you to not want to read it after just one glance at the title, I asked AI to randomly select a tag, and then I chose the one that I liked in the rankings😣😣😣. The harem story is also written in a moderate way so that it won't make people feel uncomfortable. In terms of plot, the cycle type of novel is indeed a difficult type of novel to write. The most feared thing is that the author will conflict with what he writes, but the author still manages the plot very smoothly. Regarding cheats, we have made the best use of everything and have relatively few restrictions. Some other novels have too many restrictions on cheats. Finally, there is the ending. All the big holes that need to be filled are filled, and the small ones are forgotten. After all, time loops. As long as the personal purpose is reasonable, even if it is made up now. That's probably it.
Suddenly it occurred to me that if the main foot got a one-day treasure, wouldn't it be possible to refresh it infinitely, and then refresh it 24 hours after eating it?
Prepare a new version of the introduction, let's see how it goes
The indestructible Vajra of the Maha Temple is unparalleled in the world, and the jade edict of the Immortal Realm of the Zhenwu Sect follows the law. This era is noisy and lively. As soon as Chu Qianqiu crossed over, he was arrested by Six Doors and brought to justice. And he only has a mediocre golden finger. "System, restart it." Travel through the endless loop and go back to 24 hours ago. Just give me one day and I will be the best in the world
After reading a little bit, why does the protagonist have to take risks all the time to level up? Isn't it bad? It's not that Goldfinger has restrictions or can't bring items and levels.
Chapter 814, approved
It hasn't been modified much. It must have been mistakenly released by reviewers.
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Among the books of this type that I have read, it is not an exaggeration to rank it first. Of course, it only ranks first in this SL type. For all types of books, it should not be in the top ten or twenty, but it is definitely a good book. To add a big shortcoming, water




This is a good book about time loops. It has great connotation and depth. It has amazed me many times. Moreover, the whole text has its own ideas. I would like to thank the author for giving me a good reading experience.




Time Loop is a good book. The problem with the author is that even though the book can be written simply, it is very tedious. I guess it is because of the word count that he adds a lot of incomprehensible content again and again. In the beginning, it was just a world of high-level martial arts, where an ordinary person with strong desires and a certain conscience relied on cheats to achieve success. Later, a group of very ideal and very different bosses appeared. The protagonist defeats them, fulfills them, and reaches reconciliation with the world. In the end, everything is revealed, and the protagonist becomes an omniscient and omnipotent saint of heaven.




Actually it's okay. I stopped watching it when it was released. The plot was a bit interesting at the beginning, but then it became cliche. It's a pity.













