
Swallowing the Starry Sky for Billions of Years
by Eat Oranges
About This Novel
As a mixed-blood descendant of a weak branch of Kano and ape-men, his greatest wish is to become a cosmic-level, so that his father and mother can be recognized by the tribe. As long as it reaches the cosmic level, it will definitely be possible! (Swallowing Starry Sky fan work, the timeline is very old, there is no plot after the appearance of Luo Feng)
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Official(64)Scraped 22d ago
No time travel?
Not a time travel story? No one should be watching
It's so well written. I have always felt that the most fascinating thing about Swallowing Starry Sky is not Luo Feng's rise to power. And the vast starry sky and universe. Infinitely wonderful and infinitely charming. Make people yearn for it
The fanfic is not about time travel, rebirth, and has no plug-ins, so what do you want readers to read? See how hard you work? Do you think that the son of your origin will have an opportunity in one step and enlightenment in two steps? Do talents and talents usually end when they reach the universe level?
Is Devouring without Luo Feng worth watching?
After I saw that the Flame Star Giant Beast Egg was directly taken away due to greed, I stopped watching it. It was boring. Although it is not a time-travel novel about swallowing the natives, I also know the gold content and status of the World Lord Immortal. The most indispensable thing for Devouring is genius. You might as well offend several World Lord Immortals with a single star level, and waste a lot of time just for a small secret method. Directly auctioning the Flame Star Giant Beast Egg in the early stage can completely free your wealth.
It doesn't matter if you write a fanfic that is not the original plot. Or if you are aboriginal and are not a time traveler and you don't know the plot, then you write something 🐔
It's far away from the time of the original work, which I can understand, and I'm a little tired of watching too many fans from the Luo Feng period. But the protagonist doesn't travel through time, which I can't accept. If you are not a time traveler, you cannot change the plot of the original work. If you change it, you will disrespect the original work.
The author's combat power is quite fascinating, and he suppresses the protagonist's combat power both inside and outside the scene, using various confusing operations.
In the early stages of the start, the star level was able to step on the domain master, and he almost lost in the peak talent competition (also at 6). In the 30th year of Chaos City, he started on the third floor, and after leaving Chaos City, he was only on the 6th floor and was still tied. (Bolan in the original book only reached level 6 because he chose the wrong path. You fool, Bolan may not be able to defeat the domain lord. The protagonist you wrote is not as good as the original book) I know the author wanted to write one. The colorful early stage of Swallowing Starry Sky. But you write that the off-site environment suppresses the protagonist, and you make the protagonist make various mistakes through your own crazy operations. Well, anyway, just play and suppress, press to death. If there is no environment, create an environment to suppress the protagonist, so that the protagonist can maintain the same level as the genius against the second and third.
When you write a fanfic where the main character doesn't know the plot, it's really painful to watch. And judging by the pace of your writing, you probably wrote more to the end than you did in the original novel. Shinroku
It feels like the time is wrong. The virtual universe is a secret method that was only used when the original ancestor was suppressed by the original universe. You, the original ancestor, have not been suppressed before you have the virtual universe. Obviously the time is wrong.
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Official(64)Scraped 22d ago
No time travel?
Not a time travel story? No one should be watching
It's so well written. I have always felt that the most fascinating thing about Swallowing Starry Sky is not Luo Feng's rise to power. And the vast starry sky and universe. Infinitely wonderful and infinitely charming. Make people yearn for it
The fanfic is not about time travel, rebirth, and has no plug-ins, so what do you want readers to read? See how hard you work? Do you think that the son of your origin will have an opportunity in one step and enlightenment in two steps? Do talents and talents usually end when they reach the universe level?
Is Devouring without Luo Feng worth watching?
After I saw that the Flame Star Giant Beast Egg was directly taken away due to greed, I stopped watching it. It was boring. Although it is not a time-travel novel about swallowing the natives, I also know the gold content and status of the World Lord Immortal. The most indispensable thing for Devouring is genius. You might as well offend several World Lord Immortals with a single star level, and waste a lot of time just for a small secret method. Directly auctioning the Flame Star Giant Beast Egg in the early stage can completely free your wealth.
It doesn't matter if you write a fanfic that is not the original plot. Or if you are aboriginal and are not a time traveler and you don't know the plot, then you write something 🐔
It's far away from the time of the original work, which I can understand, and I'm a little tired of watching too many fans from the Luo Feng period. But the protagonist doesn't travel through time, which I can't accept. If you are not a time traveler, you cannot change the plot of the original work. If you change it, you will disrespect the original work.
The author's combat power is quite fascinating, and he suppresses the protagonist's combat power both inside and outside the scene, using various confusing operations.
In the early stages of the start, the star level was able to step on the domain master, and he almost lost in the peak talent competition (also at 6). In the 30th year of Chaos City, he started on the third floor, and after leaving Chaos City, he was only on the 6th floor and was still tied. (Bolan in the original book only reached level 6 because he chose the wrong path. You fool, Bolan may not be able to defeat the domain lord. The protagonist you wrote is not as good as the original book) I know the author wanted to write one. The colorful early stage of Swallowing Starry Sky. But you write that the off-site environment suppresses the protagonist, and you make the protagonist make various mistakes through your own crazy operations. Well, anyway, just play and suppress, press to death. If there is no environment, create an environment to suppress the protagonist, so that the protagonist can maintain the same level as the genius against the second and third.
When you write a fanfic where the main character doesn't know the plot, it's really painful to watch. And judging by the pace of your writing, you probably wrote more to the end than you did in the original novel. Shinroku
It feels like the time is wrong. The virtual universe is a secret method that was only used when the original ancestor was suppressed by the original universe. You, the original ancestor, have not been suppressed before you have the virtual universe. Obviously the time is wrong.









