Miraculous Law

Miraculous Law

by Fatal

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About This Novel

This place is different from the earth. The technological civilization and the civilization of ancient gods are combined. There are many races, including the human race, the scale race, the feather race, the elf race, the wolf race... What kind of waves can Lu Chen, who is master of Chinese Kung Fu, make in this different world?

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Book Friends 20230204146_ca74mo ago

come on

Come on^0^~ I read your book and it feels good. It has clear ideas and I know what I want to write. The dream at the beginning is a good way to pave the way for future development. However, I feel that it is a bit hasty when naming this civilization at the end of the second chapter. It feels like the protagonist, an earthling, has some knowledge of this civilization, and he named this civilization at once. In fact, the sentence does not need to be said by the protagonist, and it does not need to be mentioned through the character's language. I feel better if this is the case. Come on, I am very optimistic about this book and look forward to its future development.

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