Pokémon Ollie
by My Neighbor Totoro Who Can Code
About This Novel
New writers seek support, Ye Xuan is a Pokémon enthusiast. Due to some accidental events, he traveled to the world of Pokémon. Therefore, Ye Xuan decided to become a Pokémon trainer and dominate the world of Pokémon. My goal is to win the league championship? No, it is to conquer all the first-level gods and become a true trainer of divine pets.
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Official(37)Scraped 8d ago
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Let's look at my experience of water escape and the art of the sea. Okay, that's enough words. Finally, if the author can give me a thumbs up, I will check in and send recommendation votes every day. Manually funny.
I hope you will write better and better in the future
Come on, I believe that as long as you work hard, there will be results. Good writing. Come on.
suggestion
1. Can you write more about the interaction between the protagonist and the elves to cultivate feelings, etc. Don't just conquer them and take them to the gym. 2. Panel Name Gender Status Characteristics Skills Genetic Skills. 3. Don't write the level of the protagonist's elf too high, and don't capture the final form of the elf in the wild. Only when the protagonist himself is trained from the basic form to the final form can he feel a sense of accomplishment. At the beginning, you have an elf with a high level who will directly crush others. 4. There are so many powerful elves on the roadside NPC. Elite, King, and Champion trainers are pretty much the same. Come on, keep working hard! ! ! 💪
The author writes well. I like Pokémon very much. I hope you continue to work hard. I will give you a recommendation vote. Come on.
I think the writing is okay, but some places are not smooth. Come on
Personal opinion. I think I talk a little too much. . . .
Cheering you up! ! !
Come on, improve your writing skills! ! ! The author is so sweet There are many people writing this kind of fan fiction now, and you can learn from them.
This book is even more rubbish than a novice.
The writing is even more rubbish than a running account.
You write like someone is robbing you of your money, so urgent, why do you do it so quickly?
What do you want to express? Especially at the beginning of the first picture, I was stunned. It's so urgent to write.
Just two chapters and you're done
Ah, is this okay for the author? Why not write more? What would you do if you write more →_→
I won't go if I don't know my name
Who did he follow by accident?
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Community(0)
Official(37)Scraped 8d ago
Check in and sign in.
Let's look at my experience of water escape and the art of the sea. Okay, that's enough words. Finally, if the author can give me a thumbs up, I will check in and send recommendation votes every day. Manually funny.
I hope you will write better and better in the future
Come on, I believe that as long as you work hard, there will be results. Good writing. Come on.
suggestion
1. Can you write more about the interaction between the protagonist and the elves to cultivate feelings, etc. Don't just conquer them and take them to the gym. 2. Panel Name Gender Status Characteristics Skills Genetic Skills. 3. Don't write the level of the protagonist's elf too high, and don't capture the final form of the elf in the wild. Only when the protagonist himself is trained from the basic form to the final form can he feel a sense of accomplishment. At the beginning, you have an elf with a high level who will directly crush others. 4. There are so many powerful elves on the roadside NPC. Elite, King, and Champion trainers are pretty much the same. Come on, keep working hard! ! ! 💪
The author writes well. I like Pokémon very much. I hope you continue to work hard. I will give you a recommendation vote. Come on.
I think the writing is okay, but some places are not smooth. Come on
Personal opinion. I think I talk a little too much. . . .
Cheering you up! ! !
Come on, improve your writing skills! ! ! The author is so sweet There are many people writing this kind of fan fiction now, and you can learn from them.
This book is even more rubbish than a novice.
The writing is even more rubbish than a running account.
You write like someone is robbing you of your money, so urgent, why do you do it so quickly?
What do you want to express? Especially at the beginning of the first picture, I was stunned. It's so urgent to write.
Just two chapters and you're done
Ah, is this okay for the author? Why not write more? What would you do if you write more →_→
I won't go if I don't know my name
Who did he follow by accident?
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