There is a Huge Problem with My Entry on Cultivating Immortality!

I see there are a few questions now First: Wen Taiping has no explosive points. For example, Master Gu's Journey to Immortality, the mysterious 008, and Road to Immortality's Burning Mountains and Cooking the Sea are both reasonable and unexpected explosions. Second: The world view is unclear. It's chapter 250 now, and the world view is still unclear. It's not that you write about a very clear world view and major forces, but that the readers have a basic understanding of the world and the major forces at least around 100 chapters. Third: The characters are flat. This requires a lot of attention to penmanship. It is impossible to create many distinctive and brilliant characters like Master Gu and the Lord of Mysteries. You can also spend time and energy to create only one or two key characters at key nodes. Fourth: Organization and motivation. A lack of clarity can make readers feel confused, and a lack of motivation can make readers suspicious. I'm not quite sure whether this article has this problem, but I do feel a little confused and doubtful. Maybe I didn't read the article carefully. Oh, and the protagonist is too smooth sailing, which makes readers feel lazy and unsurprised. It can be arranged that the protagonist originally wanted to complete A and B in an action, but only completed A and lost C. Or you have completed unexpected D and lost C [Note: The uncompleted A or B cannot be obtained by the enemy, or the enemy has obtained it but cannot use it, and C can be recovered. For example, C means injury or limited cultivation, etc.] The words of a family only add laughter to the ears. If you listen to them in vain, they are not enough to teach you.

The protagonist looks like a fool. Is he really a modern person? Knowing that there are cultivators, you are still questioning the birthday money given by the dragon mother. Even if you are questioning, it is not like this. And the protagonist's grandfather's abnormality is not found at all?

Is there anyone else? Some just squeak

That medieval entry I copied is about cultivating immortality.

After reading Chapter 80, the golden finger setting is quite interesting, but the writing is a bit bland, and there are no ups and downs. Moreover, the style of cultivating immortals is too low, and even a small town member feels like he can arm-wrestle with immortals.

The story is well described and relatively novel.

It's a bit like the setting of Lord of Puro. After reading dozens of chapters, the author seems to have combined Lord of Puro and a normal fairy tale. The story structure is okay. I'll write it slowly, hoping to find my own way.

Meow meow meow meow, I like it very much

Is there anyone else? Is there anyone else? Is there anyone else?

It's a third-rate online novel, but the narrative and subject matter are not bad at all. I hope the author can stick to it. The popularity of it can only be determined by time and destiny.