Lord of Another World: Starting from Infinite Copy

It makes me feel so frustrated. Is this the writing style from ten years ago?

Once upon a time, I saw books that I didn't like very much, and they were all thrown away, because I believe that readers don't need to and can't teach the author to write things, unless they see a very deadly poisonous point, or see a pleasant point that is applauded. In that case, you need to spit it out quickly, and you really can't hold it back. I don't know what the author thinks of readers' suggestions. Some may accept them humbly, while others may sneer at them. They hope that readers who have too much to do will quickly move away and save the use of words to influence other remaining readers. We all know that novels are not detailed narratives and are reasonable without any need. But this time I wanted to read it after reading 10 chapters. I thought about it and left some complaints and suggestions for the author. It's not that I'm too busy, it's that there are too few people writing fantasy novels now, let alone good ones. I used to never read seedlings with less than 1 million words, but now I have started to read them. Because it is a seedling, I will just say it. If the author feels that my text is inappropriate, he can delete it after reading it. I don't want it to have a bad impact on the author. First of all, if you are serious about writing a book, change the name a little. Although this name is simple and clear, it is somewhat discouraging. It feels like an assembly line work. I don't understand the naming rules very well. I won't go into details here. I'm a bit lax in reviewing after reading ten chapters. After all, there are new writers and new books, and the works and authors are improving every day. But if you think about it, as a reader, I haven't found anything interesting after reading ten chapters. Isn't this a problem? The reason why I say this is because I have read several similar books before, all with the same problem, but when it comes to this one, I have a lot of fate and want to talk about it. Whether it is a fast-paced book or a slow-paced book, the first ten chapters must be able to catch the reader's attention. The protagonist has a potential skill in time travel, and encounters the situation of encountering a tide of beasts in a small border town. In fact, the plot cannot be called a highlight. If you look at the Lord story, at least 2/3 of it is written in this routine. What's more, the protagonist has no sense of existence, no personality, and no decent setting. I didn't even remember his name. To be honest, it doesn't feel out of place if you write another person who just jumped out after ten chapters as the real protagonist. Because the protagonist really has no sense of existence, he didn't even have the Black Knight villain who jumped out for a chapter or so to impress me. Impressive characters, eye-catching skills, thought-provoking settings, a fascinating plot, and a sense of immersion that people can't escape from through the plot. These are some suggestions I give to the author. I don't know how to write, just like I don't know how to cook food in a restaurant, but I can taste it salty. I don't want to put too much pressure on the author, but I hope the author can notice these and continue to improve in the next chapter and next book. The author's path is not so easy, but I still admire the brother who can use his writing work to support his family. I will follow the author, so please don't pay too much attention and continue to work hard.

Damn it, this kind of holy mother should be cut into pieces by a thousand cuts, almost killed by her family and still act like nothing happened, this piece of trash shouldn't be alive. The most appropriate thing is to kill the pigs and feed them. I can't watch the garbage male protagonist.

Ordinary, that's it? That's it? The protagonist's psychological activities are very cautious, and the things he does are stupid and sweet and seek death. Isn't the writing contradictory?

Just because he copied this word infinitely, it felt like he had read the entire novel.

I didn't see any comments, so I quickly recommend it. The writing is okay and the logic is okay.

I feel that the stability you created at the beginning is different from the one after you set off. Your character is out of touch, a bit silly and sweet like in movies and TV series. I don't like Lord stories with this kind of character, so I'm a bit heavy-handed. I'm sorry, but I still like other plots and settings, so I can only give you four stars.