Riding and Slashing Simulator in the Lord of the Rings

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There are very few novels about The Lord of the Rings, and a good hand is a poor one.

I really like horse-and-blade novels, and what you wrote is also good. But all the horse-and-blade novels have a big drawback. The protagonist sweeps across countries and unifies the continent, but he only has a few thousand soldiers in total. You wrote this book, you can definitely change the number of people! Like other fans, at least there are hundreds of thousands of orcs in the army. If you have a system, you can travel to other worlds and represent the human race. At least, at least, at least there must be an army of one million. Say important things three times, one million army, one million army, one million army!

I have read chapters 7 and 8 so far. To be honest, your simulation is not interesting at all. It looks very uncomfortable and is very long. It is better to set it to enter the dungeon to complete the task, stop the outside world, and experience it in the first person of the protagonist instead of the third person simulation.

There is too much nonsense. The simulation experience does not affect the main story but can occupy a chapter. No matter how well written the simulation content is, the number of words is low.

The setting of the simulation is completely random, just like a lottery. The latter briefly mentions the past few years in reality, and actually says that the simulation has achieved almost no results in the past few years? This seems too deliberate, not to mention that the author arranges several chapters of text for each simulation, which seems very inappropriate. At the beginning, it is obvious that the simulation of dying quickly and without rewards does not deplete the protagonist's spirit. In the following years, even if the luck is not very good, he should be able to accumulate a lot of honor points, reputation, and dinars!

How can I put it? The writing is good. The logic in the early stage is okay. I hope the author will continue to work hard and not give up halfway.

At first, I thought it was a horse-and-cutting plug-in to compare the equipment of Middle-earth. After seeing it, I realized that the author wrote a story about three worlds. It is a simulator in name, but it actually carries two strategic lord games. The plot, characters, and even writing are all excellent. However, the author is very persistent and likes to use straightforward writing to get through many important plots. It is a pity. If it were expanded, the book could be at least half thicker. The ending was a bit uninteresting. It's a pity that there is no scene with the Fellowship of the Ring. Overall, it's a good book. I recommend it.

After reading Chapter 7 or 8, I was confused as to whether I was traveling alone or with a group of people. The timeline was also a bit confusing.

There are so many typos, I'm not interested in reading anymore.