Azeroth: Building a Lol Legion

This mortal is very confusing. Yordles are mortals, Ryze is also a mortal, monkeys are also mortals, Vastaya are also mortals, and weapons have become mortals. In fact, adaptive can be added in front, and it is clearly marked. Lol passive has been adaptively changed, and it feels more reasonable. The result always emphasizes mortals. Whose mortals live more than 1,000 years (little murloc, Ryze, fox). The mortal class is given to Garen, the prince, easy to trust, good luck, etc. Titan, Ryze, and Murloc, it's not appropriate to label them as mortals. Ryze is almost pickled by the world runes.

I only see a dumb guy who relies on passiveness for everything. He doesn't have enough strength to use his passive abilities at all, and I don't see any training he usually does...

I can only give 4 stars. There are too many typos, boss.

The writing is not very good, there are many typos and omissions, and the protagonist is poorly described.

When you see this kind of growth-type passive, don't say that I have overwhelming combat power and can fight with gods. Ask Xiaofa and Thresh if they can beat gods. This is not a cool article for me.

I always think about how to write plots every day. Today I recalled more than 50 pieces I wrote. I feel that they don't match the theme and have no highlights. I'll give you more descriptions of Goldfinger later.

Chapter 16 was published after Chapter 19. I don't know how to adjust it. Some friends who know it can tell me. It took me a long time to adjust it but it didn't work, which greatly affected the reading experience.

I counted, and almost ten people said that I have a lot of secondary designs. I admit it, but it has no impact on the main plot at all. You can think of it as a parallel world of World of Warcraft, just like the plot of Warlords of Draenor. My secondary designs are all to increase the interest and enjoyment of the story. The general direction will not change. So if you think my secondary designs have changed your perception, then you don't have to watch it. If you think it is interesting to pick up the goods, you are especially welcome. I am afraid of that sentence and will not delete the comment. As long as you are right, I will reply and even adopt your suggestions. Thank you again to all the book friends who commented.

Feel sorry. I'm usually very busy, so I haven't read a comment for a long time. I'll change it tonight.

To be honest, I really want to make a war-mad warlord, why not do it in another place? Southsea Town, Stromgarde, The Hinterlands, Arathi are just a bit difficult to start with. Working in Stormwind City is not a question of whether the writing is good or not. Readers will love to see how you are submissive to Terenas. You're not happy with what you're doing to Lothar and Varian.