The World of Immortality in a Box
by Bon Mots
About This Novel
Qin Feng traveled through the world of Chinese martial arts and was attacked by a sneak attack. His martial arts was hindered. When he was feeling desperate, he discovered a mysterious box in the secret room of his ancestral home. In the box, there are towering green mountains, waterfalls flying down three thousand feet flowing from the mountains, and a large number of birds and animals entrenched in the mountains. There are also a group of lifelike and exquisite little people inside, with flames coming out of their mouths and hard rock armor on their bodies, resisting the ferocious monsters. Qin Feng stretched out his hand and crushed the monster to death easily. ... A large number of Zhongxuan cultivators live in the world of immortals, in the wild mountains. A group of immortal cultivators tried their best to resist the monster beast, but were about to be killed by the beast. Suddenly, a giant finger appeared in the sky, crushing the monster to death instantly.
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Official(2)Scraped 6d ago
I gave up, I really can't stand it anymore! Study hard and make progress every day. Shennong was poisoned to death!
I have already thought of the content of the story: cultivating immortals to recover from injuries, becoming famous, and traveling through time.
The connection between scenes or characters always feels a bit laggy, not smooth, and a bit inappropriately repetitive. If one thing is repeated in different ways, with obvious water injection, it will not be able to write a novel well. If your writing skills are not good enough, write slowly, and if the number of words is not enough, then work harder, add a little bit of diaosi atmosphere, and control the quality and detail description more, instead of repeating it in different ways.
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Community(0)
Official(2)Scraped 6d ago
I gave up, I really can't stand it anymore! Study hard and make progress every day. Shennong was poisoned to death!
I have already thought of the content of the story: cultivating immortals to recover from injuries, becoming famous, and traveling through time.
The connection between scenes or characters always feels a bit laggy, not smooth, and a bit inappropriately repetitive. If one thing is repeated in different ways, with obvious water injection, it will not be able to write a novel well. If your writing skills are not good enough, write slowly, and if the number of words is not enough, then work harder, add a little bit of diaosi atmosphere, and control the quality and detail description more, instead of repeating it in different ways.
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