I Have a Weird System

If you are not sure that the female character will be well written, don't add a female character! I read the first 10 chapters! The male protagonist's mother's friend's daughter made me very poisonous! She was forcibly dragged into the mall to buy a bunch of clothes (the male protagonist paid), and then asked the male protagonist to pretend to be her boyfriend to attend the company party, and then the male protagonist was threatened. Seeing that she was being harassed, she taught the rich second generation a lesson and took him away. As a result, she said: You ruined my job and you support me. Another point is that after taking a shower in the middle of the night, I ran to the male protagonist's room and took cow's tears as eye drops! And it was described as a glass bottle before, and it didn't say it was eye drops or anything. Was it somehow treated as eye drops? And running into the boys' room in the middle of the night wrapped in a bathrobe to get eye drops? What kind of logic is this? All I can say is that the plot is far-fetched and extremely poisonous! There are some I haven't listed yet and it really makes me sad to see them!

It's a good thing that someone criticizes it. It may not be very good, but it will be updated all the time! If you find anything unreasonable, you are welcome to criticize😘😘

It's all the same and has no sense of novelty. It's suitable for bookworms aged 1 to 3 years. Old bookworms older than 3 years may find it a bit boring, so I guess.

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Come on, author, I support you. I can update it twice a day. The story is quite novel, but there are more male supporting characters and the heroine is not in a hurry. The foreshadowing is done first to leave suspense, and it will be released after one or two hundred levels. It is best to have something to do with the underworld.

I have read a lot of books, and now urban, rebirth, fantasy, fan fiction, and sports books all feel the same. After reading it, I know roughly the structure and development route of the book, but there is nothing new at all. During this time, I changed my taste to hard science fiction and officialdom novels. I've watched the hard classics, but I'm not interested anymore after watching too much. Now I turn to horror and suspense. Overall this book is great. I hope the author will work harder. I won't talk about the logic, foreshadowing, and characters if they are OK at this stage. In short, just don't let book fans guess your story development script. Just fit the actual logical behavior of the character. The mission script is eye-catching. I've also read the House of Horrors that book friends mentioned, but I haven't read it after dozens of chapters. I just feel it's a little out of touch with the logic of the characters, how should I put it? You can have a protagonist's halo, but it must be logical. Some books don't pay attention to the supporting characters, and they are always irritating and mindless. The level of criticism is not at all level, and the submission has no basis at all. Do I doubt that the supporting characters are brainless? A famous person once said that there are two things that people cannot look directly at: the sun and human nature. Are all people that simple? There is no shortage of such books now, right? After reading so many books, I can only remember a few authors. Usually I want to read a book of that type, so I search for the name of the author of that type to find a book to read. I hope the author will work hard. Looking forward to updates!

Recommend, the author takes a look, I have an adventure house The author of this book has very strong logical thinking skills. You can learn from it. When writing a book, don't just state one thing, but include more foreshadowing, suspense, etc. Come on Ollie!

Dear author, don't stop updating, keep at it, it will get better

This protagonist is really crazy. What brand of mobile phone is 499? The protagonist doesn't want to ask about the brand. Didn't you have a mobile phone before? Why spend money to buy one when you are already poor? Is the fat man's part meant to set off horror? And that stray dog, the protagonist's aura is really big. And that mobile phone, does it have a mobile phone sim card in it? Is it okay to say that there is software from unknown sources in the new mobile phone? Don't you suspect it's a second-hand refurbished machine?

I really like this horror article. There are no good horror articles in QQ reading (I welcome trolls to criticize me). I came across it accidentally, and then I kept following it. Although there was no reward or anything, I kept reading it in books, but I think this There's nothing wrong with it, it's not bad. I just like it very much. I also like the speed of updating the articles, from accidental to intentional. Now this is the only horror and suspense article on the top of my bookshelf. I love it so much. I believe I will stay with it until the end ❤️