Dou Po: I'm Really Not a Girl

Please enjoy, the last picture, looking at Yunzhi, the wind,,,,,

A bit poisonous, he robbed Xiao Yan of his opportunity and dual cultivation, and when he arrived in Zhongzhou, he still had the same cultivation level as the original Xiao Yan. Also, the protagonist's personality is just like a sissy, no different from a woman at all.

I have only read Chapter 18. Is the author writing a fanfic and not reading the original work seriously? There are always problems with some basic settings. For example, when Yao Lao appeared, and how many days Nalan Yanran stayed in the Xiao family after breaking off their engagement, the original work was so bloody that she had the nerve to stay. There is also the price of Juqi Powder, 900 gold coins, the base price is 100 gold coins, which is outrageous. This is obviously something wrong. I don't know why it is written like this. There is also Kung Fu. When I read Chapter 18, there was no mention of Kung Fu at all. Does the author not know the difference between Kung Fu and fighting skills? If you don't practice Kung Fu, how can you improve your level of fighting spirit? There is also Yao Lao's apprenticeship. You don't talk about the protagonist's fighting spirit attribute, not Huo Jiamu. You are an alchemist and you have good talent. There is also a cave. There is the body of the tomb owner in the cave. Inside there are fragments of the Pure Lotus Demon Fire Map and three keys, which are used to open the stone box. There are three stone boxes, the Colorful Poison Sutra, Eagle Wings and Mad Lion's Roar. When the little fairy doctor got the Seven-Color Poison Sutra, he didn't even know what his constitution was called, and how could the Seven-Color Poison Sutra suppress the poisonous body of disaster? There is also Ice Spirit Flame Grass in the cave, which is the main material for refining the Blood Lotus Pill. I don't know if the protagonist can absorb the strange fire from behind, I don't know the properties of the exercises, I don't know how to absorb it if I don't refine the elixir and there is no medicine to absorb the spirit.

The more I watch it, the more disgusting it becomes. The protagonist is very pretentious. He seems to be pretending to be innocent, pretending to be teased, and then refusing to welcome you. Speechless😓

The character of the main character is simply unattractive, too pretentious and effeminate. The protagonist is a female figure, but she does not become a woman. Let the author take a look at the character of the protagonist. He is a proper green tea bitch. To be honest, eunuchs are more like men than him.

I can only say that it's okay. There are some poisonous points and some interesting points. The most important thing is the writing. I really need to practice my writing. I don't really like the protagonist's character. It's a bit neither tomboyish nor torogynous.

It was okay at first, but the more I watched it, the more disgusting it became 😐, neither male nor female, regardless of gender

Not good. The more I listen to it, the more disgusting it becomes. It was written by a man and written for a woman.

The main reason is that the writing style is too ordinary, just like pure vernacular writing, without any embellishment. Whatever you want to say is written in very direct vernacular writing. Compared with some of my junior high school compositions, it feels very watery but not very watery. The writing is very easy to understand, but that's the only thing that is easy to understand!

Every time I read a novel about a girl who looks like a boy, I think about it! Or? ! The protagonist doesn't wear pants! This way no one will misunderstand that the protagonist is a woman all day long! ! ! Does my suggestion make sense? ? ?