Adventurer Camp Log

Well, how should I put it, there are reasonable and unreasonable places, food and grass-

Suspected to be a reincarnated creature from an external station The writing is very good, and the plot has a good grasp of the sequence and transition. I feel that the author is very skilled in his skills, and he also created the mysterious and scary atmosphere well. The adventure process is somewhat close to the next chapter of the video game "Darkest Dungeon" My personal score would be 7.4

Grain- Dark dungeon-like background with obvious advantages and disadvantages Advantages: The atmosphere of fear and despair is written when exploring Disadvantages: 1. The writing style fluctuates up and down. When writing about fear, the writing is very good, but in other places, the writing becomes inconsistent. 2. The character's personality is too naive and two-dimensional. How could such a naive character survive in such an environment? To put it simply, the sewing is not very good and the painting style conflicts. 3. Same as above, the changes in character personality and behavior are too exaggerated, and the painting style is too two-dimensional. 4. The author directly complained in the comment area that he didn't know how to use a knife. Let's not mention that this kind of background is completely unwatchable without a knife. Such a sentence directly kills the entire tense atmosphere. What's the point of watching it?

The best time-travel novel with a dark dungeon world view that I have seen so far. The writing style is very comfortable. There is no old-fashioned formula of taking out the original heroes and marginalizing them to set up a protagonist. Instead, it takes apart the elements of the original worldview and redesigns an interesting world. It is actually difficult to write a dungeon fanfic. After all, Dark Dungeon is a game in which one person controls a group of people. If the protagonist is written as a certain character in the team, it will feel that the protagonist's subjectivity is very poor, because the influence of teammates will be particularly large, which cannot be decided by the protagonist. And if the protagonist is strengthened to the point where he can be killed by one person, then many of the designs of this worldview will not be reflected at all, and it will be very boring. Writing a group portrait is both too difficult and cumbersome. This book provides a very good idea. He writes the protagonist as the leader of the team, who gives orders to control the team, which not only maximizes the subjectivity but also ensures a sense of immersion. And because teammates are living people, they will not completely obey orders. The contrast between this and the situation in the game further helps the author to shape the characters and world view. Very good seedlings, wait and see