
Start Exploring the Unknown at Hogwarts
by Scholar Traveling In Plain Living
About This Novel
A man who has been lying in bed for a lifetime due to illness accidentally travels to a colorful magical world. Knowing the plot in advance, what choice will he make? Become the third generation Dark Lord and complete the unfinished business of the previous two generations;
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Official(4)Scraped 5d ago
So-so
When I read Chapter 8, the author may have written this book without even looking at the HP information. I saw a lot of flaws. The protagonist didn't know that Harry Potter was in 1991, didn't know the timeline, and the description of the spells was very rough. As we all know, there is no magic in the Harry Potter world. In the original book, using too many spells or excessive contact will cause the wizard to suffer from symptoms such as poor physical strength or dizziness. There is never any mention of magic depletion. This is a typical game setting with blue bars. Deny that it is your own creation, but it is very abstract for HP fans. The description of magic power in the original work is that the magic power increases naturally as the wizard grows, and the magic power will not increase after almost two years of graduation. Also, magic spells are not about controlling the flow of magic power to achieve spell casting. As we all know, the HP world is idealistic. The conditions for successful spell casting are accurate pronunciation, clear enunciation, wand gestures, and the will to identify. If you don't believe in magic, you don't believe that you can cast spells successfully. You will definitely fail. There is still room for improvement in writing HP fan material. Don't believe it. It's useless to write a book hastily like this. You won't live long. Old HP fan bookworms will know at a glance that most of them are original and fabricated by your author. And Ollivander is also very rough. Ollivander I can't stand the tone of voice and the introduction of the wand. I also asked the fans not to create their own wand. It's very abstract. Although the protagonist was Chinese in his previous life, he is not in this life. Moreover, the author's description of the identity and appearance of the protagonist is very poor. In summary, it is both entertaining and playful. It is a piece of cake.
Guns are not as powerful as spells. Harry Potter's spells are quite powerful and can still massacre an entire city.
I know you want to innovate fan fiction, but the magic world is idealistic. When you learn magic, you become emotional and develop a split personality.
Start exploring the unknown at Hogwarts
Come on, author, take good care of you. How many times a day is this book updated?
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Community(0)
Official(4)Scraped 5d ago
So-so
When I read Chapter 8, the author may have written this book without even looking at the HP information. I saw a lot of flaws. The protagonist didn't know that Harry Potter was in 1991, didn't know the timeline, and the description of the spells was very rough. As we all know, there is no magic in the Harry Potter world. In the original book, using too many spells or excessive contact will cause the wizard to suffer from symptoms such as poor physical strength or dizziness. There is never any mention of magic depletion. This is a typical game setting with blue bars. Deny that it is your own creation, but it is very abstract for HP fans. The description of magic power in the original work is that the magic power increases naturally as the wizard grows, and the magic power will not increase after almost two years of graduation. Also, magic spells are not about controlling the flow of magic power to achieve spell casting. As we all know, the HP world is idealistic. The conditions for successful spell casting are accurate pronunciation, clear enunciation, wand gestures, and the will to identify. If you don't believe in magic, you don't believe that you can cast spells successfully. You will definitely fail. There is still room for improvement in writing HP fan material. Don't believe it. It's useless to write a book hastily like this. You won't live long. Old HP fan bookworms will know at a glance that most of them are original and fabricated by your author. And Ollivander is also very rough. Ollivander I can't stand the tone of voice and the introduction of the wand. I also asked the fans not to create their own wand. It's very abstract. Although the protagonist was Chinese in his previous life, he is not in this life. Moreover, the author's description of the identity and appearance of the protagonist is very poor. In summary, it is both entertaining and playful. It is a piece of cake.
Guns are not as powerful as spells. Harry Potter's spells are quite powerful and can still massacre an entire city.
I know you want to innovate fan fiction, but the magic world is idealistic. When you learn magic, you become emotional and develop a split personality.
Start exploring the unknown at Hogwarts
Come on, author, take good care of you. How many times a day is this book updated?









