Road to the Red Mansion

Brothers, please read the comments and study hard.

Red Mansions, in fact, it was a good idea to write about the subject of cultivating immortality. But. In Chapter 10, the author made a big mistake. The subject matter is very good. Once readers read it, they will unconsciously expect in their minds that the protagonist will slowly cultivate and show his extraordinary step by step. It is a story that is as extraordinary as banishing an immortal. But the author went to Jia Jing's Taoist temple. There is a story about asking God to come. He cares about you and even invites Laojun's Six Foundations down from the sky. . . Do you know how we readers feel when we see this? It felt too dramatic all of a sudden. Good expectations turned into nausea. You have to understand everything. There are protagonists that others don't have. This is called expectation. You have even mastered Laojun's advanced world view in one go. Instead, it shows the insignificance of the protagonist. . . Give me a chestnut. Early description. Give the reader a feeling. This is a tall, rich and handsome man. The style of painting suddenly changed. Come to town. Found out to be a country bumpkin. . . You said there are a few readers who can accept such a drama. . .

The protagonist teaches Grandma Liu, a farmer, not to be lazy but to work hard! It made me vomit...

Very good, a pornographic film for the elderly, finished in two minutes

In the Red Mansion, what kind of Tao did you practice? The Tao of Joy?

Grandma Liu is a person who knows how to repay her kindness. She helped rescue Wang Xifeng's daughter Qiao Jie. Wang Xifeng's brother sold his niece into a brothel and Grandma Liu rescued her. The author's treatment of Grandma Liu is really ridiculous, so I stopped reading after reading this.

The writing is a bit disgusting. If you want to write about cultivating immortals, he will only write about cultivating immortals. If you want to write about Red Mansions, you will just write about Red Mansions. In this way, there is a cultivator on the left and a Red Mansions, which makes people feel disgusting.

I feel quite suffocated. Although the person can be saved, I died for you for a while, so tepid, but the writing is quite good...

Later I thought about how difficult it was for the author to code, so I deleted it myself after losing my temper.

The writing is very good, and it is very comfortable to read.