Evil Cultivator and Adventurer's Diary

After reading more than 40 of them, I can only say that if you can't combine them, you shouldn't write two systems, otherwise your book will be useless. Are paper manipulation and chi-watching techniques considered magic arts? Are there any Taoists who are not proficient in meditation to preserve the spirit? If not, don't forcefully write them together.

Now I am reading Chapter 42. The protagonist has not killed anyone yet. The setting is clearly written to only kill the most evil people. I can't understand why the author wrote a supernatural novel and set up such a protagonist! This kind of setting is comparable to the protagonist of Our Lady! In a war, when you kill the enemy, are the enemies all guilty of heinous crimes? Chaofan Wen, you compete with others for opportunities, and all you kill are the most evil people? You killed a person who committed a heinous crime. His child has never harmed anyone. He is a successful practitioner and his strength is equal to yours. If he comes to kill you, whoever spares his hand will die. What? Are you planning to die yourself to help the other person? In the secret realm, you compete with others for the fairy fruit that turns you into an immortal. You win, but the other person is not a heinous person. If you don't kill the other person, the other person will reveal that you have the fairy fruit when they go out. You will be surrounded and killed by countless people. Can you kill the other person to silence him? The most important thing in extraordinary writing is to kill the enemy! Instead of setting up a Madonna persona! The enemies that the protagonist must kill cannot all be heinous people! What if the author insists on setting up a heroine who only kills the most evil people? Then you really should stop writing extraordinary articles. Not suitable for you! By the way, change your introduction and novel title! What a deception! There is no more righteous protagonist than this one!

The demigod green dragon at the beginning is level 30, not to mention the gods of various sects. To write the protagonist from level 0 to level 1, you have to write 80 chapters. At your pace, you can't write more than 3,000 chapters. In the end, the best result will be unfinished.

It's awkward for an author with poor writing skills to make the protagonist pretend to be idle.

The author might as well write fantasy directly. Many of the words and paragraphs in it are Chinese-style descriptions. The book itself doesn't have any major poisonous points, but there are still conflicts. In the early stage, I always said that I didn't dare to take human souls because the gods were in charge, especially the professional fanatic believers. Later, Nestorianism was established to kill professionals and gangsters to collect the souls. Inconsistency eats books.

The plot is pitiful, there are about 100 scenes, and I am still writing this and that, and the serious plot is not even half as long.

It was written by the studio, it's a mess

After it was free, I thought it was okay. I bought more than 30 chapters. Later, they had Chinese dialogues and I was fooled.

There was a language barrier at the beginning. How did the protagonist sell the clothes?

The novel is good, and it's refreshing. I haven't found any problems yet.