Orphans of Tetel Continent
by Beiyu Qifeng
About This Novel
[Western fantasy, slow to develop, the first book in the circle, no charge, I hope more people will point out the shortcomings, the early writing is weak, because I am trying a little bit] [On the evening of May 24th, the new book "Disaster Island: Infinite Killing" will officially start updating. I hope everyone can pay attention and collect it] Time travel is a very normal thing. There are not many people who time travel these days, but what about time travel that is 1,000 years later than Goldfinger? On this continent, everything you brought has already taken root and sprouted. Almost everyone is a force, and they all miss you, respect you and are loyal to you. At this time, you are reborn on this continent. The point is, you don't remember anything! There is no memory. You thought you were just an orphan who didn't have enough to eat or wear warm clothes every day. Poor talent, poor strength, poor life experience, struggling to survive. What to do? Be reasonable! ! ! !
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Official(4)Scraped 11d ago
Although the author's writing is not particularly good, it can be seen that he has put great care into it. After looking at the starting point, the author also provided a picture. The most important thing is that this novel is free. Come on, author😷
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The plot moves too fast at the beginning. The protagonist, Dean, is about to join a mercenary group just after his death. Then there is a big shot similar to the heroine who is injured and waiting for the hero to save her. Nothing is sloppy, there is no buffer at all. Only if you write it in detail at the beginning can you have the desire to read on. At least the background of the world must be explained, and is there any relationship between the 1000 years before the first chapter and the present? Even if there were, who would want to know?
This book is rubbish!
First, I wrote more than 900 chapters without a golden finger as a time traveler! Let's finish it without memory 1! Second, it is set as the creator of a race. Entering the world is indeed a daily intrigue. Without the participation of time travellers, the world and goals can be changed. It is just a lord's position. It's funny. At the beginning, it is the creator god who creates the race!
The character of the protagonist is not set well, almost like a virgin. Many people can't stand this setting. There are too many characters, too confusing to remember, and there is no need to describe the role of the supporting character too much. I thought that the orphan must be a key role in the protagonist's later stage. Who knew that he would just GG? His death was meaningless, and there was no mention of any growth for the protagonist. The first two volumes were really frustrating.
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Official(4)Scraped 11d ago
Although the author's writing is not particularly good, it can be seen that he has put great care into it. After looking at the starting point, the author also provided a picture. The most important thing is that this novel is free. Come on, author😷
generally
The plot moves too fast at the beginning. The protagonist, Dean, is about to join a mercenary group just after his death. Then there is a big shot similar to the heroine who is injured and waiting for the hero to save her. Nothing is sloppy, there is no buffer at all. Only if you write it in detail at the beginning can you have the desire to read on. At least the background of the world must be explained, and is there any relationship between the 1000 years before the first chapter and the present? Even if there were, who would want to know?
This book is rubbish!
First, I wrote more than 900 chapters without a golden finger as a time traveler! Let's finish it without memory 1! Second, it is set as the creator of a race. Entering the world is indeed a daily intrigue. Without the participation of time travellers, the world and goals can be changed. It is just a lord's position. It's funny. At the beginning, it is the creator god who creates the race!
The character of the protagonist is not set well, almost like a virgin. Many people can't stand this setting. There are too many characters, too confusing to remember, and there is no need to describe the role of the supporting character too much. I thought that the orphan must be a key role in the protagonist's later stage. Who knew that he would just GG? His death was meaningless, and there was no mention of any growth for the protagonist. The first two volumes were really frustrating.
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New setting, start a wonderful journey in a different way. Do you know that the ability of "creation" can bring life or eliminate yourself? From this, the mysterious door opens, and after creation, you must be able to see it, and then there will be a story. The races he created with his own hands multiplied for thousands of years and became the climate. It was only after a thousand years that he traveled here. But the legend of the Creator will never die. He has no previous memories and only thinks that he is an orphan. Only when he was "abandoned" and "beloved" did he finally find his roots. Neither of them lacked anything. Unique combat system, everyone has their own potential. Upgrading is just about exploring to the limit, there will be no existence beyond ordinary people. This is the first book for newcomers to the industry. It is unique, rigorous and responsible, with real flesh and blood. The grand world involves multiple empires, kingdoms, and races. Civilizations are constantly entangled in the development of history. The protagonist who survives may be special, but he also grew up from the ordinary. Confidence and sincerity are the only way to present the story in such a rich way. I hope that readers will enjoy the food and be satisfied with it. After it is put on the shelves, the author will not charge any fees and guarantees that the entire book will be free. In this way, I hope to evaluate it and get to know the readers.
As a trial work, the writing does seem a bit immature, and even the style makes me feel a bit like a book from ten years ago. Now, these too thin settings may not be able to support a book. In terms of writing, not much else to say, the characters' language alone reveals many problems. Translated styles are often criticized. This does not mean that translated styles are not good. Skilled translated styles can be given extra points, but imitating others may not be as good as using your favorite writing style. I have seen some Western historical authors read out the dialogues of the characters in order to find feelings when writing articles. Many authors can learn from this approach.
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