Field Notes

This novel is a hit (it's really good), and the content of the novel is highly readable. The imagination is very rich and it is worth paying attention to. You are right to pay attention! You are right when you read this novel! Come on, Ollie. (Why did you give it four points? I gave it five points to avoid making you proud)

I like this book very much. The writing style of this book is concise and easy to understand. Very imaginative, I love it. A little more rhetoric would be nice! (ง •̀_•́)งYou are right, come on!

After browsing through the comments, I have something to say. Don't just see the tip of the iceberg and leave a comment without reading the full text. The author worked very hard. The writing is good and the content is good. Suggestion: The replacement is too little, give more. No other suggestions.

This book is quite good. Compared with similar books, this book is more straightforward. Although the words are dense, I like it. You have to persevere in creating, and I believe you will be able to write a good novel. The previous collection was correct!

I have failed many times in my novel-writing career. But I don't give up, I can always see the rainbow. Comment on your own shortcomings: 1. Some readers also told me that words that are too dense will make people feel bored. I will improve it later. 2. There are a lot of foul language and Internet slang, and I know that this does not match the style of this book. However, if those words are not spoken, those stupid people will have no souls. I also know that the main character said bad words, but I did it purely for fun. 3. Poor writing style is also a shortcoming. But let me tell you a fact. When writing novels, the plot is the main focus and the writing is secondary. Simple writing is my style. These three points are summarized. Throughout my novel career, I have been praised by some and ridiculed by others. However, I am neither proud nor discouraged. Because praising me has my advantages; ridiculing me must have shortcomings. However, shortcomings are not terrible, what is perfect? As long as I am willing to discover, face and change, I can become better. At the same time, I wish the readers good health, greatly increased intelligence, full of conviction, and the possession of the European Emperor. I also wish that I can dominate the Internet literary world and occupy a good position. Come on! Own!

Tell me your feelings after reading the first chapter. 1 Each paragraph is too long. Nowadays, when people read novels, they don't read them word by word. They just scan them. There is a situation where one paragraph is just one page, which will directly dissuade people from reading it. 2. It is best not to appear in the main text of the story setting, but to add it bit by bit to make it more attractive. Otherwise, it will be like reading Baidu explanation. You can read more about the writing style of the boss and copy it yourself. 3. Finally, do not use Internet slang. It does not match the style of the book and will destroy the atmosphere.

The author is great and the book is good. However, you should learn more from other big guys. Working behind closed doors is not a good thing, come on

This novel is still okay, but a large chunk of chapters have disappeared. What's going on?

The more the author updates, the more questions arise. It's just that the logic jumps so quickly and is not coherent. However, nothing is perfect. I hope you can do better, come on!

You are lazy and the update speed is slow.