Star Leads the World
by Tnt Yang
About This Novel
In the vast universe, there is a triangular star structure composed of the day, the pink moon, and the stars. The Tissot star makes a shuttle-like crossing and rotating motion inside the three-body structure, so that the star has the day period, the pink moon period, and the star period. The common ancestor of all races, the Yu Clan discovered the laws of movement of the Tisuo Star and the structure of the triangular star, created the Star Yin Jue, and established the Star Yin Hall. Various races practiced through the gravity of the stars. This year was jointly recognized by all races on the Tissuo Star as the First Year of the Star Yin, and became the beginning of the history of civilization. Amidst the many complicated racial wars, internal disputes among the local people, and the oppression of the Feathered God Clan, the male protagonist, a stupid boy, became a peerless master cultivator through arduous efforts, and built his own industrial world to fight against the invasion of alien civilization. The auras of the male protagonist and female protagonist are not very bright, but they have gradually become the brightest stars through hard work. . .
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Official(6)Scraped 6d ago
Headache
The content is constantly updated and the collection is steadily decreasing. Why?
Give me five stars first
Take a look around. If it doesn't look good, delete it. . . . Come on, author
The first few chapters have to be revised.
First of all, I'm not particularly fond of male interstellar literature. Secondly, it's uncomfortable to watch. Instead of one sentence per paragraph, please change the layering of chapters. Before I knew it, it was the next chapter. And it doesn't connect well with the previous chapter.
Chapter corrections
Chapter correction, I posted Chapter 40 Explosion yesterday, but missed Chapter 39 Illusion, I will add it today!
There is no use in sending red envelopes in the world.
If you want to promote it, you can only code more by yourself. The first three chapters are key.
Well enough
The setting is interesting, but word order and punctuation are minor issues. I hope the author can pay attention to the word order and punctuation in the first three chapters. The first picture looks like a popular science article at first glance. I hope the author can change it.
Rating
Community(0)
Official(6)Scraped 6d ago
Headache
The content is constantly updated and the collection is steadily decreasing. Why?
Give me five stars first
Take a look around. If it doesn't look good, delete it. . . . Come on, author
The first few chapters have to be revised.
First of all, I'm not particularly fond of male interstellar literature. Secondly, it's uncomfortable to watch. Instead of one sentence per paragraph, please change the layering of chapters. Before I knew it, it was the next chapter. And it doesn't connect well with the previous chapter.
Chapter corrections
Chapter correction, I posted Chapter 40 Explosion yesterday, but missed Chapter 39 Illusion, I will add it today!
There is no use in sending red envelopes in the world.
If you want to promote it, you can only code more by yourself. The first three chapters are key.
Well enough
The setting is interesting, but word order and punctuation are minor issues. I hope the author can pay attention to the word order and punctuation in the first three chapters. The first picture looks like a popular science article at first glance. I hope the author can change it.
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