Tumor Sword Fairy

Strictly speaking, the writing style of this book is not bad, and the character description also has some characteristics. But as a web article, there are too many problems. Especially as a new book that is 25 years old What age is this? The writing style should follow the writing style of decades ago. It doesn't matter if you pursue that writing style, or you can intersperse it with funny and light-hearted things. It's just that the various routines used in it are too old-fashioned and too naked. It feels like ten years ago when some young literary writers began to change their thinking. There is a feeling of contradiction between wanting to be young writers and wanting to take the fast-food and enjoyable route of online writing... This kind of writing is prone to a problem. Character descriptions, background descriptions, and various details are all quite high-quality... But because of the high level, a large amount of text is needed to foreshadow and create plot conflicts. As a result, the plot conflicts imitate many Internet scripts from ten years ago, pretending to be a slap in the face. However, in order to keep the previous background settings from collapsing, the link of pretending to be a slap in the face is not neat enough and not exciting enough... The author has evolved to become a top online writer, using simple vernacular and concise words to describe excellent plots, characters, and settings. At present, the impression seems to be that a bunch of seemingly advanced words are used to describe a protagonist with an out-of-touch personality, and he is given the identity of a time traveler to match this personality, but the writing style also likes to be pretentious... It seems very awkward, isn't it? I don't seem to be happy either... You really have a lot of knowledge, don't you? There doesn't seem to be any, and there isn't any special metaphor or anything like that. It's just a writing style that's just for show. To be honest, if it is free, it is a book that can be read, but it is not a book that can make readers interested in pursuing... To sum it up in eight words: It's tasteless to eat, it's a pity to throw away...

There is no main line of the cultivation system, no main line of the story. After reading dozens of chapters, the protagonist is just pretending to be cool and pretentious.

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Yan Lai is happy and grudges follow his heart. This one is like the Holy Mother is alive. He keeps turning the map. This one is so embarrassing and the Holy Mother is also carrying a time bomb. He is simply invincible.

The ancient monks left behind three large tumors. Pei Xia also has one, and the misfortune is in his head. Tuozi told Pei Xia: "You have worked too hard. From today on, I hope you will lie down." Then Pei Xia's cultivation was abolished. The tumor is still naive. Can I decide whether I lie flat or not?