I Am Picking up Pieces in Douluo Continent
by Simon Abin
About This Novel
New book: "I am in Douluo, I can inherit the future legacy"--Traveling through Douluo Continent, Lu Feng found that he could see fragments of various colors, which after synthesis can be converted into money, skills, attributes, techniques, etc. The more famous the location, the greater the probability of dropping fragments; the higher the quality of the fragments when you come into contact with the original classic characters. ... Outside the Holy Soul Village, on the hillside where Tang San practiced. Picked up [Xuan Tian Kung Fragment] and [Purple Demon Eye Fragment] and met Tang Hao to teach Tang San blacksmithing skills. Picked up [Chaos Cloak Hammering Fragment] Tiandou City, Wuhun Palace, Slaughter City, Poseidon Island, Star Dou Forest... Picked up [Sword Heart Transparent Fragment] Picked up [Ultimate Bright Attribute Fragment] Picked up [Shura Demonic Sword Fragment]... A certain Saint from Wuhun Palace: Bastard! How could this despicable, shameless and obscene guy gain the approval of the angel god? A noble lady in the empire: Why does my martial spirit resonate with him? Is he my destiny? At Jialing Pass, the gods are fighting. Lu Feng held the Shura Sword in his right hand and the trident in his left hand: Xiaosan, my sword is male and yours is female, so your sword will not work when it encounters mine. ... Relying on the fragments he picked up, Lu Feng became stronger and stronger. Breaking the city with one punch, opening the sky with one sword, and finally becoming truly otherworldly.
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Official(93)Scraped 21d ago
It's just random writing. In the Douluo Universe, only Douluo Star is the soul ring system. In your case, it becomes the entire universe? Do you think Douluo Universe is too small? Or do you still think highly of Douluo God?
If you don't like Xiao Wu, just get rid of her. Why did you travel to the past and let Tang San and Xiao Wu be together? Is it because you can't do it or are you too ugly? What a shame to send Jurchen as a gift
It's Infinite Martial Soul again. I really don't understand why these authors like Infinite Martial Soul so much. It's nothing more than surprising, what's the use of anything else. The first original work also mentions that people must have twins at most, otherwise the body cannot bear it, and the soul power runs in opposite directions, so it is difficult to use twin martial souls at the same time. I don't know about the gods, but people don't need so many martial arts spirits. In the second stage of cultivation, you need to communicate with martial souls. Can you communicate with so many martial souls? If you don't have a divine martial soul, it will be nothing. If you have a divine martial soul, you will naturally specialize in one. Not to mention the multiple gods, you see, even though Tang San's Asura God was his trump card, in the end he didn't choose Poseidon, the one that suited him best, and gave Asura to Xiao Wu. Chinese practitioners also like to specialize in one area
I don't even have a martial spirit. How can I write about Douluo just for fun? Moreover, a batch of people pulled by Golden Finger can only use one martial spirit. They all cheated and suppressed their combat power. They picked up the skills in the early stage and joined the protagonist group. If they join the Spirit City or go to the other two empires, There are so many soul masters there, not only can you pick up enough fragments, but they are also of high quality. In terms of growth, will the system be short of money and resources? If you add a soul ring to a force, won't it be enough? Will the growth rate be slower if the skills are already there? It's just a plot. Let me tell you, this kind of book is only suitable for beginners
If you don't like Xiao Wu, you can kill her directly, but Send immediately persuaded me to quit. It seemed okay at first, but Send's daughter succeeded in poisoning me to death.
Alas, it doesn't work anymore. I feel like the author has a lot of secondary designs, some of which are okay, and some of which are too outrageous. The Blue Electric Tyrannosaurus has the same level of skills as the Xuantian Book. How could the original Tang San be so vicious?
The supporting characters have pretty good IQs, but the protagonist seems a bit stupid. Especially when fighting that Soul Sect, do we have to be head-on?
I feel like what I did to the kitten was a bit inappropriate.
It's still a little bit wrong with that character. After all, there is no aloofness, and at the same time, do you want to use him as the heroine? It feels boring to hang like this. Otherwise, if you want to accept it, you have to express your intention to accept it. Otherwise, I have looked at more than 10 photos here and I can't see whether you have this intention or not. Otherwise, drain it. When a piece of garbage is thrown away, after all, his talent is just that. If he is not the top genius, he will always be unable to keep up with you. After all, he has no background. In the end, he does not need you to wish him to improve, and in the end, he does not become a pendant. If he can help you control the Star Luo Empire, then it is almost the same. Otherwise, no matter how much you describe now, it is just redundant. Unlike Dugu Yan, his grandfather is a titled Douluo who can help you, and he will probably be able to help you until the later stages. Otherwise, this donkey now is just a vase at most. The previous relationship with Dugu Yan was okay and not that awkward, but when it comes to Little Cat, the emotional scenes you describe are a bit awkward, so you don't need to describe them for too long. Otherwise, if I keep describing it, it will feel a bit watery. It is better to give the results as soon as possible. Is the harvest being used or squeezed out of value? At least you have to give this meaning! Let the readers see what you want to do, instead of feeling like you are hanging on and unable to get down.
If you write about Douluo without Wuhun, you write a hairy Douluo fanfic. You have to understand that Douluo is the setting of Wuhun. You even have to change the basic settings, just like you use a computer without electricity. You can make one even if you are born with no talent. If you write about Douluo without Wuhun, it is better to write about Douluo, or about cultivating immortals. Write a hairy Douluo.
ᝰMy brother is probably tired. Today's update is so perfunctory. If he has such an attitude, it would be better not to update at all. It seems that I am being unreasonable and troublesome... That's all. My brother is always so free and easy. It's just because of the pain of my sister-in-law. I should be content with three or two chapters a day. But my sister and I seem to be a little more petty.
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Official(93)Scraped 21d ago
It's just random writing. In the Douluo Universe, only Douluo Star is the soul ring system. In your case, it becomes the entire universe? Do you think Douluo Universe is too small? Or do you still think highly of Douluo God?
If you don't like Xiao Wu, just get rid of her. Why did you travel to the past and let Tang San and Xiao Wu be together? Is it because you can't do it or are you too ugly? What a shame to send Jurchen as a gift
It's Infinite Martial Soul again. I really don't understand why these authors like Infinite Martial Soul so much. It's nothing more than surprising, what's the use of anything else. The first original work also mentions that people must have twins at most, otherwise the body cannot bear it, and the soul power runs in opposite directions, so it is difficult to use twin martial souls at the same time. I don't know about the gods, but people don't need so many martial arts spirits. In the second stage of cultivation, you need to communicate with martial souls. Can you communicate with so many martial souls? If you don't have a divine martial soul, it will be nothing. If you have a divine martial soul, you will naturally specialize in one. Not to mention the multiple gods, you see, even though Tang San's Asura God was his trump card, in the end he didn't choose Poseidon, the one that suited him best, and gave Asura to Xiao Wu. Chinese practitioners also like to specialize in one area
I don't even have a martial spirit. How can I write about Douluo just for fun? Moreover, a batch of people pulled by Golden Finger can only use one martial spirit. They all cheated and suppressed their combat power. They picked up the skills in the early stage and joined the protagonist group. If they join the Spirit City or go to the other two empires, There are so many soul masters there, not only can you pick up enough fragments, but they are also of high quality. In terms of growth, will the system be short of money and resources? If you add a soul ring to a force, won't it be enough? Will the growth rate be slower if the skills are already there? It's just a plot. Let me tell you, this kind of book is only suitable for beginners
If you don't like Xiao Wu, you can kill her directly, but Send immediately persuaded me to quit. It seemed okay at first, but Send's daughter succeeded in poisoning me to death.
Alas, it doesn't work anymore. I feel like the author has a lot of secondary designs, some of which are okay, and some of which are too outrageous. The Blue Electric Tyrannosaurus has the same level of skills as the Xuantian Book. How could the original Tang San be so vicious?
The supporting characters have pretty good IQs, but the protagonist seems a bit stupid. Especially when fighting that Soul Sect, do we have to be head-on?
I feel like what I did to the kitten was a bit inappropriate.
It's still a little bit wrong with that character. After all, there is no aloofness, and at the same time, do you want to use him as the heroine? It feels boring to hang like this. Otherwise, if you want to accept it, you have to express your intention to accept it. Otherwise, I have looked at more than 10 photos here and I can't see whether you have this intention or not. Otherwise, drain it. When a piece of garbage is thrown away, after all, his talent is just that. If he is not the top genius, he will always be unable to keep up with you. After all, he has no background. In the end, he does not need you to wish him to improve, and in the end, he does not become a pendant. If he can help you control the Star Luo Empire, then it is almost the same. Otherwise, no matter how much you describe now, it is just redundant. Unlike Dugu Yan, his grandfather is a titled Douluo who can help you, and he will probably be able to help you until the later stages. Otherwise, this donkey now is just a vase at most. The previous relationship with Dugu Yan was okay and not that awkward, but when it comes to Little Cat, the emotional scenes you describe are a bit awkward, so you don't need to describe them for too long. Otherwise, if I keep describing it, it will feel a bit watery. It is better to give the results as soon as possible. Is the harvest being used or squeezed out of value? At least you have to give this meaning! Let the readers see what you want to do, instead of feeling like you are hanging on and unable to get down.
If you write about Douluo without Wuhun, you write a hairy Douluo fanfic. You have to understand that Douluo is the setting of Wuhun. You even have to change the basic settings, just like you use a computer without electricity. You can make one even if you are born with no talent. If you write about Douluo without Wuhun, it is better to write about Douluo, or about cultivating immortals. Write a hairy Douluo.
ᝰMy brother is probably tired. Today's update is so perfunctory. If he has such an attitude, it would be better not to update at all. It seems that I am being unreasonable and troublesome... That's all. My brother is always so free and easy. It's just because of the pain of my sister-in-law. I should be content with three or two chapters a day. But my sister and I seem to be a little more petty.
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