Douluo's Ultimate Sword

I don't know how to write your outline, so I just want to give you some advice. The protagonist's talent itself is not as high as Tang San's. If it's more than chance, Tang San also has his own bugs. Now there are only three ways, 1. Seize Tang San's opportunity, and then have some opportunities of your own. 2. The protagonist has his own opportunities, and he will grab Tang San's points by the way. 3. There are not many words written yet. You can change the timeline and be born before Tang San, plus work hard to make up for your talent, and there will be some opportunities. If it conflicts with your outline, just pretend I didn't say it

I hope the author won't be as weird as other authors. In the first chapter, he always comes for a thousand years. I feel like he is basically invincible and not worth seeing. I think the best combination of soul rings is The first soul ring: a hundred years Second Soul Ring: Thousand Years The Third Soul Ring: Thousand Years The fourth soul ring: ten thousand years Fifth Soul Ring: Ten Thousand Years Sixth Soul Ring: One Hundred Thousand Years The Seventh Soul Ring: One Hundred Thousand Years The Eighth Soul Ring: One Hundred Thousand Years Ninth Soul Ring: Millions of Years I feel that this is better. Also, whether the protagonist is with a group or with the Wuhun Temple, I feel that it is better to go with the group. If you enter the Wuhun Temple, you may end up burping if you are not careful. After all, he lived with Tang San when he was a child, which can easily arouse Bibi Dong's suspicion. Also, I prefer the horizontal sword, it's quite handsome. (The above are all personal suggestions, I hope the author can adopt them)

First of all, even if the protagonist is about 12 years old and can completely defeat all the younger generations of Wuhun Temple, he will not make such a fuss. Secondly, the author directly wrote that the protagonist's Wuhun will be disabled and his eyes will be blinded. Don't you think you just blinded this book? Even if the protagonist had another chance, how many words would you have written? How many readers will be completely put off by what you wrote like this? It is more reasonable to write step by step when the conflict with Wuhun Palace reaches a certain level. If you write it directly like this, it feels like it is the kind of subject matter that was good at the beginning, but it instantly turns into the most popular trash article in online novels and becomes a highly toxic article. I'm really speechless! !

There are people who like this book and people who don't like it. Would you give up this book for people who don't like it?

There is one thing, isn't martial arts performed through martial arts? 😌😌! ? The protagonist uses other knives and hands to perform it😮😮! ! So, the protagonist won a hundred-forged knife ornament😙😙.

The protagonist has been crippled. Even if he can recover in the later stage, his strength cannot reach the level of Titled Douluo right away! Unless you can keep pretending to be a Titled Douluo, once you recover, the Spirit Hall will be the first to destroy you, and the protagonist doesn't have much of a relationship with the empire, so why can't he join the Spirit Hall? This is a poison! Even if you don't want to join, you can still agree first. You don't have much background, and the protagonist is a modern person, okay? How can any modern person not be afraid of death? Whatever you write next will be unreasonable! Because you and Wuhundian are already locked in a fight to the death, and Wuhundian cannot see a genius who has a deep hatred against them recover, so how should you write it?

After destroying the pig's feet and losing the martial spirit, how will I practice next? How about creating another system? This is not about Douluo Dalu. You might as well write a martial arts novel😕

This is different from many kinds of Douluo. I have seen many Douluo fan stories where the protagonist directly first has a soul ring that is thousands of years or tens of thousands of years old, and then he is so strong that he directly licks Tang San. This is a completely self-created route, and it also restores the imperial disputes in the original work, and the protagonist's IQ is always online. It is a good book.

It's a good book. It was written very well at the beginning, but I just ruined it in Chapter 30 and stopped reading.

It's acceptable to undercut the main character, but it's not acceptable to turn the protagonist into a lunatic. If a person can't think, he's no longer a human being.