Professional Cultivation: Start as a Farmer

After reading five chapters, this book is hard to read at first glance. The writing is too detailed and does not distinguish between primary and secondary. The first five chapters only deal with the situation of the protagonist's family and hoeing the field. There is no focus and the main line cannot be developed. The title of your novel is "Professional Cultivation of Immortals Begins with a Farmer. Immortal Cultivation Didn't See It, and the Farmer Didn't Write Anything. Then it Jumped to Archery. It rambled on for five chapters and nothing was written. It's not attractive. Who will read it? The opening chapter must be concise. You must catch the reader quickly, otherwise they will all run away.

In the end, it was not about practicing martial arts. Author, what is your title about? Have you forgotten it? There are no themes. A hammer in the east and a hammer in the west.

After reading the first chapter, I knew the quality of this book. It was all about filial piety and complaints. It didn't write anything useful at all. It's called cultivating immortals, but it's about martial arts.

You can read it, but you flip through the book too quickly. It's true that you have many friends in the world of immortality, but it's too much. The road is lonely. In reality, are you willing to give millions to your friends, just like the Foundation Establishment Pill? You haven't even eaten enough, and you still want to do this to others. If you write it down and others will read it, it will be bullshit.

The protagonist starts to have a golden finger and can practice some basic things by himself, such as practicing arrows and aiming, and practicing slashing and stabbing with swords. In the end, he can't do anything. He is still a modern person reborn, not as good as the Tu people.

When it was first released, I was rambling here and there. The plot and title can only be said to have nothing to do with each other. Moreover, I have read not only 8 but also 10 of these plots. Not to mention exactly the same, they are at least 80-90% similar. I can only say that it can be seen, it is food.

I'm really speechless. Hitting it with a hoe twice awakens the farmer profession, and casually reading this book awakens the scholar profession? Does meeting a young lady mean you need to wake up as a prostitute? Brainless plus butff

This latest chapter not only prevents theft, but also prevents subsequent reading. The four new chapters are all about anti-theft, which makes me very speechless.

The plot should be written in a reasonable way. It is normal for two villages to have a dispute over water sources and to send people to guard the water. But you are from the same village, and you think it is possible that the fields are occupied for irrigation. Are you here to write that the relationship between the two families is not good, and it would be more reasonable for you to go to your farmland to cause damage than what you are doing here?

There are too many messy trivial novels, but they are not very good at all. They just talk about breaking the world, ascending to the spiritual world, and flying to the wall!