A Mortal's Story of Immortality: I Have a Ten Thousand Souls Flag
About This Novel
A flag can collect thousands of souls and spirits and send generals; a young man can start cultivating immortality from a mortal. My name is Zhou Yi. I am in the Wild Wolf Gang. Facing the upcoming gang member assessment, I am going to start refining my soul...
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Official(3)Scraped 12d ago
It's a pity that such a good subject matter, but the protagonist has never read the original work
If that's the case, why don't you read the original work, but look at you? You should re-write the theme of cultivating immortals instead of borrowing mortals. Writing a fan protagonist who doesn't know the plot is the biggest failure. You should see many people saying this. I'm not the only one who says this. It doesn't mean that your writing is not good, but that you borrowed mortals but don't know the plot. The failure is this and not other problems, such as the protagonist's personality. Everything is good, the plot and setting are okay. It's a pity.
The protagonist has a transmigration, and when he grows up, he directly takes over his body and changes his body. This setting has a way of discouraging readers.
Not bad, please update soon👍👍👍👍👍 Wonderful thoughts
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Community(0)
Official(3)Scraped 12d ago
It's a pity that such a good subject matter, but the protagonist has never read the original work
If that's the case, why don't you read the original work, but look at you? You should re-write the theme of cultivating immortals instead of borrowing mortals. Writing a fan protagonist who doesn't know the plot is the biggest failure. You should see many people saying this. I'm not the only one who says this. It doesn't mean that your writing is not good, but that you borrowed mortals but don't know the plot. The failure is this and not other problems, such as the protagonist's personality. Everything is good, the plot and setting are okay. It's a pity.
The protagonist has a transmigration, and when he grows up, he directly takes over his body and changes his body. This setting has a way of discouraging readers.
Not bad, please update soon👍👍👍👍👍 Wonderful thoughts
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