Covering the Sky: a Single Cultivator of Wheel Sea Becomes Emperor

Author, there is something wrong with your title. I remember that at most one secret realm can really reach the Great Sage. To become an emperor, doesn't it take five secret realms to be penetrated?

Using the plot framework and writing style of more than ten years ago, it writes an indecisive and somewhat inexplicable protagonist. I want to imitate but can't write the feeling of the red-haired old monster. I want to suppress first, but it's all suppressed. I write every day that the protagonist is going to die, and the protagonist is being hunted. What kind of ancient writing style? Don't you think this is the battle that readers want to see? It didn't feel good at the end either, making the whole plot incomprehensible. The updates are slow, the plot advancement is slow, and the fan fiction is still full of toothpaste. In the current environment of online literature, this book would be half-dead at best.

The protagonist got a bad reputation in the early stage, and the normal mode turned into hell mode. The truth is that there is no hardship in eating it.

No, brother, you create the law and create the law. Your introduction has shattered Zhetian's cultivation system. You are just practicing the ancient methods of Zhetian, practicing the God's Tomb method, and practicing the Devouring Starry Sky method. I don't want to say anything. You want to take a desolate road, and you also want to create a small path on the desolate road. You also want to explore this road that you can only blindly explore, and you want to become an emperor. Isn't this equivalent to racing with others and building roads at the same time? How can you compare? ? ? I remember when I first started the method of covering the sky, it seemed to be called Tao Zhong method or something. The old man should be the Immortal King, but it was later perfected. Their realm is far beyond that of the Great Emperor. You, a little Karami, are trying to find a new way based on theirs. It's one thing to have new ideas, but don't go too far.

Let me ask, how can a single cultivator become an emperor? The so-called Jidao Great Emperor means that he has passed through the Great Emperor's Tribulation in the 9th time. The dragon on his back leaps into the Immortal Platform and merges into one, achieving the effect of jumping over the dragon gate. When he ascends to the Jidao, how can you, Lun Hai, jump to the Immortal Platform? Unless you don't practice the Secret Realm Dharma, you must create a new cultivation method. It is not to add a branch from the main trunk, but to directly replace the main trunk. It is necessary to survive the "Dharma Creation Tribulation". The heaven and earth will send down the test to test whether your Dharma has that potential. Then you don't live up to the title. You're not just cultivating the wheel. How about fraud?

After reading almost 30 chapters, I commented: Remove the modern protagonist and the identity of a time traveler, and go back more than ten years. If I were to review it at that time, this novel would still be good! But all I can say is that the protagonist is stupid and the plot arrangement is awkward. A protagonist with modern thinking, but he has some troubles! There is nothing to say about being unable to defeat and being forced to have no choice. The key protagonist is: I don't run away when I find a problem, I just watch, and I wait for the plot to develop... Let's just say this is a routine from many years ago, it is so cliché!

So fake. He must have never seen Zhetian, otherwise he wouldn't know that one can only cultivate to the Great Sage in a single secret realm.

If Mo Wuji doesn't kill Yi Qingwu later, I will abandon the book. I read later. In the first chapter, they were beaten to death, but in the next chapter, they started to have sex. The key point is that so many plots were shaped in the previous chapter: Yi Qingwu beat the protagonist almost to death, and then it became like this. Anyway, I can't stand it anymore, bye.

I, Shen Nong, tried poison and was poisoned to death. I left my last words: My Yi Qingwu and the forces behind her chased the protagonist several times. In the end, the protagonist took Yi Qingwu away👍 Several major forces in Ziwei Star have great saints. Can we respect the original work? ***The founders of some forces are great sages😐 Also, Yin Tiande, like the invincible Xiaoqiang, either chases the protagonist or cooperates with other forces to ambush the protagonist. The protagonist is like an SB. Sometimes he won't pursue him after he wins. Sometimes someone will stop him as soon as he kills. Is there someone behind Yin Tiande? Why do others help him?

Nerve, keep playing the protagonist like this to make it look like you are capable.