The Starting Reward is Seven Character Cards

For example, the eldest disciple of the great elder is dissatisfied with pig's feet. This feels quite normal. After all, his talent is there, and he is at the top level compared to ordinary disciples. But why is it that even a disciple looks down on the protagonist more or less? This needs to be changed. I also want to ask the great elder if his realm will really not collapse. I also always feel that the sect is disconnected. Is this like the beginning of another chapter?

I have watched 80% of them so far, and there is one problem. The protagonist's attitude towards Chu Xiaoyu is a problem. I think this character should not be like this. He does not clearly reject or accept it, which is embarrassing. However, the role of Chu Xiaoyu is not suitable for the heroine. Anyway, this role is very redundant and a bit dissuaded. The author first sorted out whether these female characters who appeared were likable and appropriate, and then added roles.

I tend to tell the truth a lot, but many authors don't like to hear it, and basically delete my comments. However, the facts are what they are, and I will not deliberately slander or praise them. The protagonist's performance in the early stage was mediocre, and the handling of things was mediocre. We read the novel pictures with ease, but this description is a bit like letting us read a vernacular diary. The system has been inexplicably dormant for ten years. It seems that the main character has been dormant for ten years. The character's cultivation level is immobile, which is unreasonable. It reads like the protagonist of the system cannot survive without it. I think most readers don't like this. The protagonist thinks about suicide after seeing the system unresponsive. This is also something that readers don't like that much. And the system is sleeping and is awakened by the protagonist's thoughts of suicide. This is... Okay, just wake up. The rewards and cultivation level given after waking up are mediocre, which is different from the rewards and world you described before without the sleeping system. The difference between the vision and everyone's shock is so great. The gap between the awakening and the before is huge. Author, you have to know that it was difficult to change the situation. Either you don't describe the protagonist's vision in the early stage. His cultivation level skyrocketed and he pretended to be in front of others and everyone was shocked. This made readers look forward to the show of pretense later. However, after looking at the back, it was as light as water. No one can stand this. Or you can write a system in the later stage to compensate for the sleeping period, and then directly There are many benefits. It directly describes a wave of content that is more pretentious than what you described before. It has a larger pattern. One sect cannot cover the protagonist you want to write. Put the system to sleep. The protagonist will not be able to move without the system. He wants to die and other things that are not consistent. The pitfalls have been dealt with. Otherwise, it is really worth reading... Emmm, let me tell the truth. If you want to delete it, it will be fine. After all, I have experienced it many times.

It's okay if the author doesn't have the strength. If he has the strength, others ridicule him but he doesn't kill him. I can't stand it at all. This kind of protagonist will die early and be reborn.

I just read Chapter 22 and I can't stand it anymore. It's all poisonous. It's the first time I've seen this kind of writing. All the disciples of the dignified Seventh Elder Sect look down on him. Are you telling me this is the Seventh Elder? Even if the protagonist's cultivation level has not improved in 10 years, he is still a Dongfu Mirror monk, who is said to be worse than a dog. Come on, this is a fantasy world, a world where strength is respected! Who gives you the courage to look down on monks who are several levels higher than you? Moreover, the protagonist didn't leave the sect even after his death. I just want to know why he stayed in such a sect after being bullied for 10 years and still didn't leave?

Taking on a female apprentice and asking you to write is the same as taking on a prostitute. Isn't it because you have never touched a woman? You only know how to write, and you don't care about ethics.

It would be better if it could be updated five times a day. Also, when it comes to system tasks to remove demons, you don't need to be too detailed, just go through them directly. Also, don't stress too much about the protagonist's strength. After you reach the peak of the mortal world, you will go to the fairy world. Even if you reach the peak of the mortal world, you can still write about the daily life between master and disciple. I think it is still good. Compared with the current fast food articles, this kind of blandness will make people feel good. Come on, author, it is best to update five times a day.

After reading Chapter 20, I really can't stand it anymore, there are too many poisonous points! First of all, the first poisonous point is that the protagonist is an elder, and his level is not low. As a result, everyone from the elders to the disciples are mocking the protagonist. Those who don't know better think that the protagonist is a waste. They are all elders. The other elders and even the disciples don't give the protagonist any face. What's the point of staying in such a sect? ? ? The second poisonous point is the female disciple of the protagonist. In the fantasy fairy tale world, the relationship between master and disciple is similar to that of father and son. It is really difficult to accept that a female disciple is having an affair with his master. It is too poisonous. The third poisonous point is that even when the protagonist is sleeping, the female disciple takes off his clothes and changes his clothes for the master. The protagonist still doesn't feel anything. Is this possible? Not to mention the protagonist's high level, even when I'm sleeping, I can wake up if someone touches me! There are still several bad points, so I won't go into them one by one. The rating of this book is actually 7.3, And it is the most popular one. I really don't know how this rating and popularity came about. I have only read twenty chapters. I hope you readers will read it with caution! !

The system that had been missing for ten years finally appeared and sent a gift package. The gift package looked quite generous. These seven character cards sounded interesting. Ning Lang must have taken these seven people as his disciples.

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