Not Yu-gi-oh

It's a very interesting setting. The way of converting the rules of Yu-Gi-Oh into combat methods is great. For example, reversal equals invisibility. The way of getting cards by scanning is a genius, but I feel that the plot processing can be better. I think it's better to explain the origin of each card and write a feeling of collecting a deck, instead of inexplicably bringing out some new cards that have never appeared in each chapter, which makes it easy for people to get confused. . . You need to pay more attention to the balance between the difficulty of obtaining cards and improving your strength, otherwise you may suffer a crash in the later stages. . . Come on↖(^ω^)↗

Calling this book rubbish is a compliment to you

The author is great. When we read the book, we first read the introduction, and then look at the title of each chapter. If there is no title, we will discard the book directly. If it is in the first person, we will discard the book directly. So just add a title to each chapter.

After reading the introduction, it was very exciting. I decided to put it on my bookshelf. I gave it a thumbs up and then slowly tasted Yan Ruyu in the book! Enjoy it.

I wish every chapter had a title

It's a very good book. It's worth collecting. It's really worth collecting. Book lovers who are not familiar with books can read it. Don't miss it! ! !

But it would be better if each chapter had a title

This is indeed the script of "Yu-Gi-Oh!" Keep up the good work! ! ! (Don't mistake the unit and the right to speak!)

In fact, I didn't want to rate it so quickly, because I feel that this book has some potential, and the author's skills have improved very quickly. Unfortunately, the first ten or so chapters are not very good. If the real score in my mind is now only 2 to 3 points. Or should I understand this as a foreshadowing? That would be too long and cumbersome. The opening of a book or an article is very important. Many great writers only focus on the opening of the book to attract people, but later on they just do that to make up for the word count. Just like a person's first impression, if a person has a good first impression of you, then your subsequent actions will be beautified in the eyes of the other person, and the same is true for articles. The reverse also makes sense. Of course, this is useless now, but I think it would be a pity if the book was ruined by those ten chapters, so I mention it. Furthermore, I would like to talk about the advantages and disadvantages of this book. First of all, the selection of the material is interesting. I think the first impression readers will have when they see the title is that the book is about something related to Yu-Gi-Oh. After reading it, they find that it seems to be a bit disconnected from Yu-Gi-Oh. Then some people will find the result fresh, while some people will feel that it destroys the classic in their hearts. This still depends on how deep the author's skills are. Tired of pretending to be a crowd pleaser, I seemed to have discovered a new world. Then there is the writing. According to my understanding, the author wrote quite a long chapter before. I am not sure whether the author can write a long story. If it is a short story, this is a fatal drawback. Judging from the content, it talks about the protagonist's useless beginning, and then continues to the protagonist's second exploration of the Baoyu Kingdom. It is not difficult to see that compared to the previous water chapter, the later details are more in place, but for the time being, it makes people feel that they have not entered the real state. Because the article has no emotions, the characters in it also have no emotions, and the rhythm is barely detailed. The whole article is like a running account in students' writing. But the strange thing is that I think the author's writing style is more than that level, at least much better than many books about fighting. This is one of the reasons why I pay attention to this book. Finally, as mentioned earlier, this article has no emotions. It does not mean that the author must add a heroine to flirt with or anything, but it means that the characters in it are all printed from the same mold. There is no reason or contradiction, and they only exist for the author to continue the writing. There's nothing wrong with the supporting characters, but it's very bad if the protagonists are like this. In this way, the reader's sense of substitution will be very weak, which is also a key factor in the success of the article. Okay, actually I haven't finished saying so much about bb, but how to understand it or whether to implement it is the author's own wish, so I don't want to say too much. All in all, it is a potential book with a unique subject matter but not a good one. I hope the author will not be a eunuch. After all, I am very interested to see how far this book can go. The four stars I gave it are based on my expectations. Well, I won't talk nonsense anymore, the author should do his best.

Cheers to the author, I give you five stars.