God-level Evolution Starting from Pirates

Just for this paragraph, I will rate it five stars✧*｡٩(ˊᗜˋ*)و✧*｡

Brothers, brothers, wait for me to test the poison and come back. If I can't come back, it means I have been poisoned to death. Brothers, wait for me to come back.

Chapter 10 Why do you want to kill the empress? Why are you hostile to her? It's just like a novel I've read before about being reborn as Smoker (why are you pretending to hold Tina in your arms and saying that the empress was defiled when the Draco were enslaved.) I've never seen a fan more disgusting than this. I cursed the author of that book to choke to death when eating, drinking water, and running away... Ahem, I'm off topic. It still looks good, but fans of the sea may not be able to accept it, just like I can't accept that the author wants to write the empress to death.

The combat effectiveness is too low, and there are a lot of typos.

As for the protagonist, I think he has a double standard and is a bit persuaded to quit. He wants to be protected by the navy at the beginning. To put it bluntly, he is afraid of death and has no dreams or opinions of his own (he says he doesn't want to be chased by the navy and then forcefully says that he can catch pirates and that he hates the government). However, from the moment he gets on the navy ship, he looks very confident on the surface, but it feels very awkward.

Or maybe I misunderstood the original work. At the beginning, I saw the protagonist capture Luffy, and Garp actually took revenge. This is not consistent with the original work at all. Garp always hoped that Ace and Luffy could become marines, and he should be happy after capturing Luffy, so I feel that a lot of people will be lost here in the first seven or eight chapters!

To be honest, I was more dissuaded from it when I saw Enelu conquered. According to normal people's thinking, the first thing in a different world is to survive first, and in a world where the strong is respected, if you want to survive, you must use all means to become stronger. Whether in reality or in the game, we can understand that the early advantage will expand step by step, eventually forming a huge gap. If this advantage is missing, the final defeat is inevitable. Possibility is myself. I wrote earlier that Pig's Knuckle chose to capture Luffy and Ace in order to become stronger. He also gave up Hancock and later killed Whitebeard. However, he chose to take in his younger brother when he arrived at the Island of God. Why did he give up further strengthening himself to expand his advantage, and this advantage is not small. You know, Pig's Knuckle has no friendship with Enel, and there is nothing to admire about it. Why do you like Enel so much? Not to mention that there is an upper limit for the system to directly upgrade the level. At that time, Pig's Knuckle didn't know that there was such a setting. So, did you think that Pig's Knuckle was too strong, so did you weaken it? Your unreasonable choice makes people feel like they have a lump in their throats and gives up the desire to continue reading.

Chapter 1: Persuading you to quit. You wrote the Piaopiao Fruit into an Airflow Fruit.

Swipe, swipe, swipe, grab it together if you have money, such a high score →_→

Damn it, you still have the ability to be a dog. You haven't done enough in real life, the opportunity to time travel is wasted on people like you.