
I Have Been in Konoha for Thirty Years
About This Novel
(The new book "Konoha: This Ninja Is Too Internal" has been released~ Welcome to collect and read) In the 20th year of Konoha, Lin Chuan traveled through time and became an orphan in Konoha Orphanage, at the same time as the Sannin. After discovering that he could get rewards by signing in to famous places, people and events, Lin Chuan decided to sign in silently in Konoha. [Sign in Tsunade: Reward the Immortal Body (Significantly increase vitality, enhance strength, repair...] [Sign in to Hokage Rock: "Comprehensive Solution to the Will of Fire"] (Three years of simulation, five years of Hokage, and completed the Will of Fire subjects.) [Sign in: Sarutobi Hiruzen: Reward Ninjutsu Professor Talent, Five Chakra Attributes] [Sign in: Orochimaru: Reward top scientific research talents] ... Lin Chuan kept developing secretly until he became strong enough, and then he set his sights on the towering Otsutsuki. So during World War II, he shocked the ninja world with his swordsmanship, defeated Hanzo, was revered as a sword master by Haruka of the Iron Kingdom, rescued White Fang, shocked the ninja world, established a secret organization, collected orphans buried in the original work, developed human beings' own senjutsu, spread improved taijutsu, and prepared for the future resistance to Otsutsuki.
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Official(25)Scraped 17d ago
What feelings do seven- and eight-year-old children understand?
A misunderstanding that often occurs when writing Naruto fan fiction is that children in the ninja world know what love is at the age of seven or eight. Personally, I think most authors need to look up the Boy Scouts of the Golden Triangle. Those children are indifferent to life because of their environment, but you are kidding when you say they understand what love is. The body has not developed to a certain level, there is no hormonal influence, and children do not have so many messy thoughts. So we can see that children in kindergarten will play with their peers regardless of gender.
Did you write that the second generation was still around when the Sannin was in school? Damn it, you came up with a root organization. Danzo must have lived so long that he dared to start a dark organization in front of the second generation.
There's a reason why it's not popular. It's like cultivating immortals. You have to get a fairy body just to sign up for Yang Release. It's fucking bullshit to sign up for the Sharingan. Every secret technique of the ninja clan also needs to be signed up. What's the use of telling me? The sign-in system is just an auxiliary, you mainly have to rely on yourself. I really don't understand why civilians insist on getting a Sharingan and all those messy secret techniques. Do you think you are a hybrid? Orochimaru and Jiraiya are also civilians who can grow up without a system, why can't you?
The will of fire is to kill the people in his own village. It's so funny. If it's me, I'll just write a big boos. People from the Uchiha family come out. Kill Konoha F4 first at the beginning. Danzo, the third generation, must die.
This protagonist is such an idiot. The first person to gain power is not to help the people who have helped him before, but he actually starts to enjoy it by himself. Damn it.
Speechless, where did Kato Shizune's niece come from?
Create any number of organizations and become Hokage directly. The entire Fire Country will be yours.
In the operation and operation to unify the ninja world and use the power of the entire ninja world to fight against the Otsutsuki clan, you create an organization and the structure is too small.
slow pace
I have never seen such a slow novel. The ninja war has not yet started after 200 chapters. I have been improving the protagonist's ability, but it is good-looking and suits me. Xiba, if you update quickly, you won't have these problems.
There are too many explanations written before it was put on the shelves. It's very ink and it's hard to read if you don't have the patience. I've already fallen in love with Naruto fanfics. Do you think you still don't understand the settings? I'm very ink. I hope there will be improvements in the future.
Scribing it means nothing, and adapting it is not compiling it.
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Official(25)Scraped 17d ago
What feelings do seven- and eight-year-old children understand?
A misunderstanding that often occurs when writing Naruto fan fiction is that children in the ninja world know what love is at the age of seven or eight. Personally, I think most authors need to look up the Boy Scouts of the Golden Triangle. Those children are indifferent to life because of their environment, but you are kidding when you say they understand what love is. The body has not developed to a certain level, there is no hormonal influence, and children do not have so many messy thoughts. So we can see that children in kindergarten will play with their peers regardless of gender.
Did you write that the second generation was still around when the Sannin was in school? Damn it, you came up with a root organization. Danzo must have lived so long that he dared to start a dark organization in front of the second generation.
There's a reason why it's not popular. It's like cultivating immortals. You have to get a fairy body just to sign up for Yang Release. It's fucking bullshit to sign up for the Sharingan. Every secret technique of the ninja clan also needs to be signed up. What's the use of telling me? The sign-in system is just an auxiliary, you mainly have to rely on yourself. I really don't understand why civilians insist on getting a Sharingan and all those messy secret techniques. Do you think you are a hybrid? Orochimaru and Jiraiya are also civilians who can grow up without a system, why can't you?
The will of fire is to kill the people in his own village. It's so funny. If it's me, I'll just write a big boos. People from the Uchiha family come out. Kill Konoha F4 first at the beginning. Danzo, the third generation, must die.
This protagonist is such an idiot. The first person to gain power is not to help the people who have helped him before, but he actually starts to enjoy it by himself. Damn it.
Speechless, where did Kato Shizune's niece come from?
Create any number of organizations and become Hokage directly. The entire Fire Country will be yours.
In the operation and operation to unify the ninja world and use the power of the entire ninja world to fight against the Otsutsuki clan, you create an organization and the structure is too small.
slow pace
I have never seen such a slow novel. The ninja war has not yet started after 200 chapters. I have been improving the protagonist's ability, but it is good-looking and suits me. Xiba, if you update quickly, you won't have these problems.
There are too many explanations written before it was put on the shelves. It's very ink and it's hard to read if you don't have the patience. I've already fallen in love with Naruto fanfics. Do you think you still don't understand the settings? I'm very ink. I hope there will be improvements in the future.
Scribing it means nothing, and adapting it is not compiling it.









